JAAN MEIN JAAN (4- Liner)... "MohaN"

by surindarn on August 15, 2020, 02:43:54 PM
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JAAN MEIN JAAN

Khush qismat neend sotee hai
Merye bistar par woh baa.araam
Main raat bhar tehaltaa-o-rat.taa hoon
Gar aajaaye jaan to aajaaye jaan mein jaan

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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2020, 06:22:15 PM »
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  Applause :clap:वाह वाह क्या बात है।
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on August 15, 2020, 06:22:15 PM
  Applause :clap:वाह वाह क्या बात है।
Bahut shukria Rastogi Jee.
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2020, 01:59:11 PM »
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JAAN MEIN JAAN

Khush qismat neend sotee hai
Merye bistar par woh baa.araam
Main raat bhar tehaltaa-o-rat.taa hoon
Gar aajaaye jaan to aajaaye jaan mein jaan

Surindar N.    "MohaN"

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Applause Applause Applause
Bahut shukria all readers.
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