!!!..Jaan nikal rahi hai..!!!

by nashwani on September 02, 2013, 01:32:46 AM
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Dil me, tere ishq ki shama jal rahi hai,,
     Aahista aahista doori darmiya pighal rahi hai..

Bhulane ki koshish ki din bhar tujhko,,
     Ab aur na kar paunga, ki shaam dhal rahi hai..

Khwabo.N me kar jaate ho aisa jaadu,,
     Ki subah aankhe.N khulte hi jaan nikal rahi hai..

Shant to main raha hun har pal har lamha,,
     Tu hamesha mujhme armaan ban machal rahi hai..

Kareebiya.N mumkin nahi jaanta hun,,
     Na mil paa rahi judaai bhi, ye baat khal rahi hai..

Chal raha hun jo main tanha, rato.N me,,
     Lag raha jaise, chand bani tu saath chal rahi hai..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2013, 01:50:16 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2013, 02:16:06 AM »
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Nshwaniji Kya bat hai Bahut Khoob,Bade Style mein likh rahe ho aaj kal.Likhte Rahiye Aur Yun hi Bazam ki Shaan bane rahiye.Nice One.
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2013, 08:40:13 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero daad Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2013, 09:07:37 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2013, 09:14:49 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2013, 10:04:31 AM »
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Dil me, tere ishq ki shama jal rahi hai,,
     Aahista aahista doori darmiya pighal rahi hai..

Bhulane ki koshish ki din bhar tujhko,,
     Ab aur na kar paunga, ki shaam dhal rahi hai..

Badhiya.. bahut mubarakbaad

ye mausam ka asar hai ya unki sangat ka..
charo taraf har dil me ishq ka ehsaas..
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2013, 10:18:59 AM »
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waah waah kya baat....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2013, 10:30:12 AM »
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wah ashwani bhai wahh behad khubsurat qalaam lajawab
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2013, 05:00:57 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on September 02, 2013, 01:32:46 AM
Dil me, tere ishq ki shama jal rahi hai,,
     Aahista aahista doori darmiya pighal rahi hai..

Bhulane ki koshish ki din bhar tujhko,,
     Ab aur na kar paunga, ki shaam dhal rahi hai..

Khwabo.N me kar jaate ho aisa jaadu,,
     Ki subah aankhe.N khulte hi jaan nikal rahi hai..

Shant to main raha hun har pal har lamha,,
     Tu hamesha mujhme armaan ban machal rahi hai..

Kareebiya.N mumkin nahi jaanta hun,,
     Na mil paa rahi judaai bhi, ye baat khal rahi hai..

Chal raha hun jo main tanha, rato.N me,,
     Lag raha jaise, chand bani tu saath chal rahi hai..!!! Ñ
waah  waah bohat khoob ,...bohat c daad,...
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2013, 05:01:38 PM »
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waah waah ashwani ji.. behad khoobsurat ehsaaso se labrez poetry.. bahut khoob..
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2013, 05:05:33 PM »
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wooooow bahot achey, daad hi daad...
Kareebiya.N mumkin nahi jaanta hun,,
Na mil paa rahi judaai bhi, ye baat khal rahi hai..
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2013, 07:52:22 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khwabo.N me kar jaate ho aisa jaadu,,
     Ki subah aankhe.N khulte hi jaan nikal rahi hai..

Shant to main raha hun har pal har lamha,,
     Tu hamesha mujhme armaan ban machal rahi hai..

Kareebiya.N mumkin nahi jaanta hun,,
     Na mil paa rahi judaai bhi, ye baat khal rahi hai..

Waaaaaaah Ashwani kya khoob likhe ho... zabardast kalam rahi... mujhe tumhare yeh ashaar bahut bahut bahut pasand aaye... hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2013, 02:35:44 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on September 02, 2013, 01:50:16 AM
wah wah

Shukriya saahill jee..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2013, 02:38:32 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 02, 2013, 02:16:06 AM
Nshwaniji Kya bat hai Bahut Khoob,Bade Style mein likh rahe ho aaj kal.Likhte Rahiye Aur Yun hi Bazam ki Shaan bane rahiye.Nice One.

Aap jaise achhe shayro ko padh padh kar thoda style ala ho gaya hai..Usual Smile

Bahut shukriya ravi jee..happy9
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