-----/// Jaane kya dard tha usey /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on May 04, 2012, 06:44:33 PM
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wo chhip chhip ke tanhaai mein aansoo bahaati rahee,
jab bhi mili mujhse apne aansuon ko chhipaati rahee,

dekh ke uski aankhon ka haal agar wajah poochha kabhee,
wo har baar aankh me gaya huwa koi tinka bataati rahee,

khushiyon se duur, dard se kuch aisa rishta thaa uskaa,
har dard ko bahut pyaar se apne seene se lagaati rahee,

dekh ke dusron ke aansoo koshish karti thi kam karne ki,
wo bhulaake apni mohabbat humein mohabbat sikhaati rahee,

seene pe rakh ke paththar wo khushi ke geet gaati rahee,
jaane kya dard tha usey jise wo hameshaa chhipaati rahee...


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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2012, 06:50:55 PM »
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wah wah wah, bahut hi khoob, wah wah wah

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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2012, 06:57:38 PM »
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wonderfuuuuullllll bahut khooobb hridayjiii.....

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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2012, 06:58:29 PM »
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wonderfuuuuullllll bahut khooobb hridayjiii.....

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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2012, 07:00:53 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah Hriday Jee, kyaa baat hai, Ghazab, Bahut hi Khoob. Meri taraf se daad rau sab.
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2012, 07:04:13 PM »
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wo chhip chhip ke tanhaai mein aansoo bahaati rahee,
jab bhi mili mujhse apne aansuon ko chhipaati rahee,

dekh ke uski aankhon ka haal agar wajah poochha kabhee,
wo har baar aankh me gaya huwa koi tinka bataati rahee,

khushiyon se duur, dard se kuch aisa rishta thaa uskaa,
har dard ko bahut pyaar se apne seene se lagaati rahee,

dekh ke dusron ke aansoo koshish karti thi kam karne ki,
wo bhulaake apni mohabbat humein mohabbat sikhaati rahee,

seene pe rakh ke paththar wo khushi ke geet gaati rahee,
jaane kya dard tha usey jise wo hameshaa chhipaati rahee...


*****HRIDAY*****

nice.....!
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2012, 05:43:13 AM »
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Zabardast........ bahut khoob ..........
Hunur tha pass unke bhi ki banane ka Aashiya
Magar wo humare intezaar me chupati rahi///
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2012, 06:48:13 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2012, 01:26:02 PM »
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bahut sunder hriday ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2012, 11:48:25 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Jasbir ji....!!!

wah wah wah, bahut hi khoob, wah wah wah

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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2012, 12:58:29 PM »
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Thank you sooooo much Dolly ji.....!!!

wonderfuuuuullllll bahut khooobb hridayjiii.....

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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2012, 06:40:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Iftakhar ji....!!!

Waaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah Hriday Jee, kyaa baat hai, Ghazab, Bahut hi Khoob. Meri taraf se daad rau sab.
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2012, 06:04:03 PM »
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thanks a lot Sheba ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2012, 06:08:06 PM »
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kya baat hai Hriday ji ... nice !

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