-----/// Jaane kya dard tha usey /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on May 04, 2012, 06:44:33 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 16, 2012, 04:22:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pramod ji....!!!

Quote from: Pramod singh on May 05, 2012, 05:43:13 AM
Zabardast........ bahut khoob ..........
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«Reply #16 on: May 17, 2012, 03:52:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Hasan ji....!!!

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 05, 2012, 06:48:13 AM
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 bahut  khooooob !!
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«Reply #17 on: May 21, 2012, 05:02:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa bhai....!!!

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«Reply #18 on: May 21, 2012, 05:03:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on May 05, 2012, 01:26:02 PM
bahut sunder hriday ji
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«Reply #19 on: May 21, 2012, 05:52:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Intezar....!!!

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kya baat hai Hriday ji ... nice !

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«Reply #20 on: June 24, 2012, 12:40:36 PM »
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Congratulations ,

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«Reply #21 on: June 25, 2012, 01:20:34 PM »
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Thank you soooo much iadmin ji jo aapne meri  is koshish ko Yoindia Newsletter me jagah di,... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon....!!!

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«Reply #22 on: June 25, 2012, 01:25:03 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 04, 2012, 06:44:33 PM
wo chhip chhip ke tanhaai mein aansoo bahaati rahee,
jab bhi mili mujhse apne aansuon ko chhipaati rahee,

dekh ke uski aankhon ka haal agar wajah poochha kabhee,
wo har baar aankh me gaya huwa koi tinka bataati rahee,

khushiyon se duur, dard se kuch aisa rishta thaa uskaa,
har dard ko bahut pyaar se apne seene se lagaati rahee,

dekh ke dusron ke aansoo koshish karti thi kam karne ki,
wo bhulaake apni mohabbat humein mohabbat sikhaati rahee,

seene pe rakh ke paththar wo khushi ke geet gaati rahee,
jaane kya dard tha usey jise wo hameshaa chhipaati rahee...


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wonderful..  Applause Applause Applause Applause

तुमने सोचा नहीं कि यह मोहब्बत क्या है
चंद लफ़्ज़ों की लकीरें,दिल लगाना क्या है

चाहत वो पैमाना है, जिसमे हस्ती का कोई मोल नहीं
कभी समंदर से पूछो, रेत को गले लगाना क्या है.!!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: June 25, 2012, 01:32:35 PM »
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Thank you soooooooooo much Suman ji for the sweet sweet reply...!!! aapne bahut pyaaraa likha hai.. thanks again...!!!

dekha hai humne bhi rett ko samundar me milte huye,
bheed me humne dekha hai khud ko tanha chalte huye,
yun to mohabbat kya hai iska ehsaas nahi hai humein,
humne to bas dekha hai apno ko iski aag me jalte huye...
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«Reply #24 on: June 25, 2012, 01:40:08 PM »
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Thank you soooooooooo much Suman ji for the sweet sweet reply...!!! aapne bahut pyaaraa likha hai.. thanks again...!!!

dekha hai humne bhi rett ko samundar me milte huye,
bheed me humne dekha hai khud ko tanha chalte huye,
yun to mohabbat kya hai iska ehsaas nahi hai humein,
humne to bas dekha hai apno ko iski aag me jalte huye...

 Applause Usual Smile

kuchh aisaa kar gayaa betaab jana ham ko jaan ka
na jee ko hosh hai dil ka, nah dil ko hosh hai jaan kaa
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«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2012, 11:31:28 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

dil mera hai aashiq aapke har andaaz ka,
fikar hai humein to bas aapke aitraaz ka...
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