*****JAANE KYU*****

by kaushikbhawna008 on December 26, 2008, 06:21:38 AM
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Na bure ham hain na gunehgaar wo kehtaa hai mujhe
Par Jane kyu najar khud se ham mila nahi paate

Aise to bohut se gam chup chaap hain hamne seh liye
Bas aaansuon ko ab aur pee nahi paate

Jane kyaa nasha tha unki baton mei jisme khud ko hai bhula diya
Warna koi bhi baat ho, ham bhula nahi paatei

Wo hai saath fir bhi adhurapan sa kyu hai lagta
Jane kyu dil ko uske hone ka ehsaas bata nahi paatei

Sochte hain kahin gujar na jaayei wo raat ka khwaab bankar
Bas ek isi darr se ham raaton ko ab so nahi paatei
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2008, 06:30:05 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 26, 2008, 06:21:38 AM
Na bure ham hain na gunehgaar wo kehtaa hai mujhe
Par Jane kyu najar khud se ham mila nahi paate

Aise to bohut se gam chup chaap hain hamne seh liye
Bas aaansuon ko ab aur pee nahi paate

Jane kyaa nasha tha unki baton mei jisme khud ko hai bhula diya
Warna koi bhi baat ho, ham bhula nahi paatei

Wo hai saath fir bhi adhurapan sa kyu hai lagta
Jane kyu dil ko uske hone ka ehsaas bata nahi paatei

Sochte hain kahin gujar na jaayei wo raat ka khwaab bankar
Bas ek isi darr se ham raaton ko ab so nahi paatei


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Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Kaushik,

Kaushik yoindia pe bahut saare shayro ke saath likha hai,
aaj tumhare saath likhne ki iltaza hai, agar manzoor ho to
reply zaroor dena inn lines ka...


U to har lamhe me ham jeete the zindagi ko,
jab se gaye ho tum ham mout ko bhula nahi paate,

Aadat na thi hame gamo ko baatne ki jab se gaye
ho tum dil ke gamo ko chupa nahi paate,

Aankho me masti aur sharart rakhte the ham jab se
gaye ho tum ham aankhon se aansoo hata nahi paate,

Log kehte the ham pitte pilaate bahut hai mehfil me,
jab se gaye ho tum ham sharaab ka nasha khud par chada
nahi paate...

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2008, 06:44:49 AM »
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bahoot khoob bhawna and shally... bsahoot he axcha likha hai dono ne
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2008, 06:46:57 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 26, 2008, 06:44:49 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob bhawna and shally... bsahoot he axcha likha hai dono ne

Shukriya Pooja Didi,

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2008, 06:49:11 AM »
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thnks a lot lot shally
bohut acha likha hai tumne bhi last 2 lines bohut achi lagi hamei

reply mei kuch likh rahe hain umeed hai aapko bhi pasand aayga

khushnasib hain wo jo sharaab to pee lete hain
badnasib to ham hain jise peene k liye aansu bhi naseeb nahi
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2008, 06:50:42 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 26, 2008, 06:44:49 AM
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bahoot khoob bhawna and shally... bsahoot he axcha likha hai dono ne


shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2008, 06:53:24 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 26, 2008, 06:49:11 AM
thnks a lot lot shally
bohut acha likha hai tumne bhi last 2 lines bohut achi lagi hamei

reply mei kuch likh rahe hain umeed hai aapko bhi pasand aayga

khushnasib hain wo jo sharaab to pee lete hain
badnasib to ham hain jise peene k liye aansu bhi naseeb nahi

Aacha hua ki tere hisse me aansoo aaye,
Sharaab ne tassali di raat bhar ke liye subah ham bhi
aansoo ke liye taraste paaye.

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2008, 07:02:23 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 26, 2008, 06:53:24 AM
Aacha hua ki tere hisse me aansoo aaye,
Sharaab ne tassali di raat bhar ke liye subah ham bhi
aansoo ke liye taraste paaye.

Shally.

thnks
again nice reply by ur side

mat sanjo daaman ko aansuon se tu apne
ek din saath tere ye bhi chod jaayenge
mila denge har yaad ko khaak mei fir bhi
ye dil ko tadpaate hue hamesha paayenge
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2008, 07:06:53 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 26, 2008, 07:02:23 AM
thnks
again nice reply by ur side

mat sanjo daaman ko aansuon se tu apne
ek din saath tere ye bhi chod jaayenge
mila denge har yaad ko khaak mei fir bhi
ye dil ko tadpaate hue hamesha paayenge

Thnx &
Nice reply Kaushik,

Chod jaana tha jise wo chala gaya, aab ye uske diye gamm chod
ke na jayenge,
Mila gaye wo khaak me jinke ham apne the, aab ye begane
gamm hame kya khaak tadpaayenge,

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2008, 07:14:35 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 26, 2008, 07:06:53 AM
Thnx &
Nice reply Kaushik,

Chod jaana tha jise wo chala gaya, aab ye uske diye gamm chod
ke na jayenge,
Mila gaye wo khaak me jinke ham apne the, aab ye begane
gamm hame kya khaak tadpaayenge,

Shally.

nice one shally

mila tujhko ek gam hai to mein bhi kaha aabad hoon
jise sunta nahi khuda bhi mein aisi ansuni fariyaad hoon
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2008, 07:30:22 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 26, 2008, 07:14:35 AM
nice one shally

mila tujhko ek gam hai to mein bhi kaha aabad hoon
jise sunta nahi khuda bhi mein aisi ansuni fariyaad hoon

Thnx Kuahik & Nice One From Ur Side,

Ek gamm mila hota to hass ke seh lete ham,
yaha har roz gammo ke baadal dil pe utarte hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2008, 10:15:27 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Bhawna and Shally Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2008, 10:19:09 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 26, 2008, 10:15:27 AM
Bahut Khoob Bhawna and Shally Ji

Shukriya Rajesh Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2008, 10:23:38 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 26, 2008, 07:14:35 AM
nice one shally

mila tujhko ek gam hai to mein bhi kaha aabad hoon
jise sunta nahi khuda bhi mein aisi ansuni fariyaad hoon

wah, bahut khoob Bhavna


SAB KI FARIYAAD RABB SUNTA HAI,
DIL SEY TOH KARO
DIL USEY DEH KEY BAITHEY HO
FARIYAAD KAHA SEY KARO ?


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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2008, 10:27:07 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 26, 2008, 07:30:22 AM
Thnx Kuahik & Nice One From Ur Side,

Ek gamm mila hota to hass ke seh lete ham,
yaha har roz gammo ke baadal dil pe utarte hai.

Shally.

wah, sahi kaha aap neh SHALLY


GAMOH SEY ABB TOH RISHTA JUDD GAYA HAI
DUKHO SEY ABB TOH DIL BHAR GAYA HAI
NA JANEY KAB DOOR HONGI YEH SAJAYEH
JITEY JIH YEH ISHQ MARR GAYA HAI




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