““ jaane kyun… ””

by nirala on June 18, 2011, 03:38:55 PM
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tujhse hum naaraz nahi
jaane kyun ab bajta dil ka saaz nahi…

yun to baaten hoti hain hardum har waqt
jaane kyun aatee ab aawaaz nahi…

lipatte to hain aaj bhi seene se tere
jaane kyun ab bujhti dhadkano ki pyas nahi…

andaaz wahi hai shokhiyon ki tujhme aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab hota mohabbat ka wo pehle sa ehsaas nahi…

lamha lamha beetaye intjaar me tere, hai aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab wahi iss dil ka sartaaz nahi…

mai bhi na badla, badla hai tu bhi nahi
jane kyn aaj lagta hai hua koi aaghaz hi nahi…
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2011, 05:12:50 PM »
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WAH WAH
tujhse hum naaraz nahi
jaane kyun ab bajta dil ka saaz nahi…

yun to baaten hoti hain hardum har waqt
jaane kyun aatee ab aawaaz nahi…

lipatte to hain aaj bhi seene se tere
jaane kyun ab bujhti dhadkano ki pyas nahi…

andaaz wahi hai shokhiyon ki tujhme aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab hota mohabbat ka wo pehle sa ehsaas nahi…

lamha lamha beetaye intjaar me tere, hai aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab wahi iss dil ka sartaaz nahi…

mai bhi na badla, badla hai tu bhi nahi
jane kyn aaj lagta hai hua koi aaghaz hi nahi…
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2011, 09:01:05 PM »
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Kya baat hai Nirala dost..
Dil dil se daad..
Laga jaise mere dil ki awaaz koi mujhe hi suna gaya..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2011, 08:16:37 AM »
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bht bht khoob nirala ji...
sabhi sher khoob rahe...
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2011, 03:29:47 AM »
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bahut bahut khub niralaji.... dil ki baat....

khub....
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2011, 04:34:08 AM »
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tujhse hum naaraz nahi
jaane kyun ab bajta dil ka saaz nahi…  tearyeyed tearyeyed

yun to baaten hoti hain hardum har waqt
jaane kyun aatee ab aawaaz nahi… Feared. Feared.

lipatte to hain aaj bhi seene se tere
jaane kyun ab bujhti dhadkano ki pyas nahi…   bahut khoob

andaaz wahi hai shokhiyon ki tujhme aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab hota mohabbat ka wo pehle sa ehsaas nahi… Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

lamha lamha beetaye intjaar me tere, hai aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab wahi iss dil ka sartaaz nahi…

mai bhi na badla, badla hai tu bhi nahi
jane kyn aaj lagta hai hua koi aaghaz hi nahi… Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2011, 07:43:33 AM »
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thanx chote bhai
WAH WAH
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2011, 07:03:00 PM »
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thanx rahim dost…
mujh jese utpatangi ka likha agr aapko dil ki bat lagi to ye mera inaam ho gaya… Usual Smile
thanx
god bless u dost
be happy
Kya baat hai Nirala dost..
Dil dil se daad..
Laga jaise mere dil ki awaaz koi mujhe hi suna gaya..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2011, 07:08:37 PM »
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tujhse hum naaraz nahi
jaane kyun ab bajta dil ka saaz nahi…

yun to baaten hoti hain hardum har waqt
jaane kyun aatee ab aawaaz nahi…

lipatte to hain aaj bhi seene se tere
jaane kyun ab bujhti dhadkano ki pyas nahi…

andaaz wahi hai shokhiyon ki tujhme aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab hota mohabbat ka wo pehle sa ehsaas nahi…

lamha lamha beetaye intjaar me tere, hai aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab wahi iss dil ka sartaaz nahi…

mai bhi na badla, badla hai tu bhi nahi
jane kyn aaj lagta hai hua koi aaghaz hi nahi…


Wow... Its beautifulllllllllllll... Kya baat hai Nirala ji,., Tussi tho Kamaal ka Likhte ho.. Ak dum Mast.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

~Sophi~
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2011, 07:18:24 PM »
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thanx manzil ji…
wese mene sher kahan likha ek bhi Usual Smile
bht bht khoob nirala ji...
sabhi sher khoob rahe...
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2011, 07:37:11 PM »
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bahut bahut khub niralaji.... dil ki baat....

khub....
thanx manju ji…
aap jaisi mallika-e-dard se daad milna fakra ki bat hai
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2011, 07:04:33 AM »
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suresh ji…
aapka bhi style anokha hai…
aapke daad ka baehad sukriya…
khus raho dost hamesha…
thanx
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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2011, 07:10:02 AM »
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Wow... Its beautifulllllllllllll... Kya baat hai Nirala ji,., Tussi tho Kamaal ka Likhte ho.. Ak dum Mast.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

~Sophi~
thank ew sooo much sophi ji…… Usual Smile

wese aapke shayri likne ka andaaz aur alfaaz bht jana pehchana hai tongue3
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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2011, 07:35:11 AM »
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tujhse hum naaraz nahi
jaane kyun ab bajta dil ka saaz nahi…

yun to baaten hoti hain hardum har waqt
jaane kyun aatee ab aawaaz nahi…

lipatte to hain aaj bhi seene se tere
jaane kyun ab bujhti dhadkano ki pyas nahi…

andaaz wahi hai shokhiyon ki tujhme aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab hota mohabbat ka wo pehle sa ehsaas nahi…

lamha lamha beetaye intjaar me tere, hai aaj bhi
jaane kyun ab wahi iss dil ka sartaaz nahi…

mai bhi na badla, badla hai tu bhi nahi
jane kyn aaj lagta hai hua koi aaghaz hi nahi…

achchca hai
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2011, 07:38:12 AM »
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bahut achhe nirala ji...
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