Jaate Jaate Wo Pukaar Chalaa,.

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Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.
Door Nazar Se Pyaar Chala,.

Talab Khushi Ke Phoolon Ki Thi,.
Dekar Ghamon Ki, Bahaar Chala,.

Aankhein Ab Dhoondti Hai Usko,.
Thandak Iski Jo Maar Chala,.

Ab To Rona Bhi Nahi Aata Mujhe,.
Aadat Ye Bhi Sudhaar Chala,.

Bhooloonga Use To Kaise Main,.
Jaate Jaate Jo Pukaar Chala,.

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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2010, 03:22:42 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 14, 2010, 03:18:43 PM

Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.
Door Nazar Se Pyaar Chala,.

Talab Khushi Ke Phoolon Ki Thi,.
Dekar Ghamon Ki, Bahaar Chala,.

Aankhein Ab Dhoondti Hai Usko,.
Thandak Iski Jo Maar Chala,.

Ab To Rona Bhi Nahi Aata Mujhe,.
Aadat Ye Bhi Sudhaar Chala,.

Bhooloonga Use To Kaise Main,.
Jaate Jaate Jo Pukaar Chala,.

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Ji........bahut umdaa rahe sabhi ashaar ! dil se daad
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2010, 06:17:47 PM »
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Azeem Sahab aadaab Janab!

Kaise hai khush o aabaad hoNge yehi ummid .....
Eid ki bahut bahut mubarakbad.... Usual Smile

Behad ummda lagi aapki yeH bhi kalaam daad janab..... Usual Smile


Quote from: Azeem on September 14, 2010, 03:18:43 PM

Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.
Door Nazar Se Pyaar Chala,.

Qatel hai janab behad khoob... dard ki laher aa gayi chehare per..... kafi gehti baat kahi hai dard e judaai ki..


Talab Khushi Ke Phoolon Ki Thi,.
Dekar Ghamon Ki, Bahaar Chala,.

Waah janab bahut umdaa daad daad..


Aankhein Ab Dhoondti Hai Usko,.
Thandak Iski Jo Maar Chala,.

achcha sher hai kafi gehara hai daad


Ab To Rona Bhi Nahi Aata Mujhe,.
Aadat Ye Bhi Sudhaar Chala,.

kia baat hai bahut achche janab.... kafi achchi baat kahi hai.... [/colo]


Bhooloonga Use To Kaise Main,.
Jaate Jaate Jo Pukaar Chala,.

bahut achche daad achcha laga ...


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Bahut khoob azeem sahab.. behad achchi aur sahiN kalaam kahi hai aapne nape tule lafzoN meiN daad janab aise hi likhate rahiye.... Khush rahiye....

Khuda hafez......
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2010, 07:47:59 PM »
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Azeem bhaijan,
Bahaut ache..Maza agaya..
Dil se daad aur bahaut bahaut sari duaein..!
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2010, 10:52:07 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 14, 2010, 03:18:43 PM

Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.
Door Nazar Se Pyaar Chala,.

Talab Khushi Ke Phoolon Ki Thi,.
Dekar Ghamon Ki, Bahaar Chala,.

Aankhein Ab Dhoondti Hai Usko,.
Thandak Iski Jo Maar Chala,.

Ab To Rona Bhi Nahi Aata Mujhe,.
Aadat Ye Bhi Sudhaar Chala,.

Bhooloonga Use To Kaise Main,.
Jaate Jaate Jo Pukaar Chala,.

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Very Impressive ........ Azeem Sahab ! Very Nice Creation... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai......Qubuul kareN... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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Quote from: Radhika_2 on September 14, 2010, 03:22:42 PM
Ji........bahut umdaa rahe sabhi ashaar ! dil se daad

Shukriya Radhikha Ji,,.
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 14, 2010, 06:17:47 PM
Azeem Sahab aadaab Janab!

Kaise hai khush o aabaad hoNge yehi ummid .....
Eid ki bahut bahut mubarakbad.... Usual Smile

Behad ummda lagi aapki yeH bhi kalaam daad janab..... Usual Smile


Bahut khoob azeem sahab.. behad achchi aur sahiN kalaam kahi hai aapne nape tule lafzoN meiN daad janab aise hi likhate rahiye.... Khush rahiye....

Khuda hafez......


Bohat Bohat Shukriya Parwaaz Ji,.

Aapko Bhi Eid mubarak Ho, aur Hausla Afzaai Ka Shukriya,.

Allah Khush Rakhe Aap Ko Aur Saare Doston ko,.
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 14, 2010, 07:47:59 PM
Azeem bhaijan,
Bahaut ache..Maza agaya..
Dil se daad aur bahaut bahaut sari duaein..!
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Shukriya Rahim Bhai, Duaaon aur hausla Afzaai ke liye,.
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Quote from: Shihab on September 14, 2010, 07:57:32 PM
Bahut Khub Azeem Bhai

Hazaron Dad Kabul Karen...


ALLAH Pak Aapko, Chust, Mast Aur Wyast Rakhe Ameen


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
Shukriya Mere Bhai,

Allah Kareem tumhe bhi khush rakhe aamen
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Very Impressive ........ Azeem Sahab ! Very Nice Creation... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai......Qubuul kareN... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....


Shukriya Anshumali ji
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Azeemmmmm.......bht hi kum shabdon me bht gehre dard ko bayaan kar gaye tum.......
Applause Applause Applause Applause

jate hue mud mud k dekhte rahe hum
wo fer k muh ko bas chal diya

use jata dekh kar rok bhi na sake hum
wo zakhm kuch aisa dekar chal diya

ghut kar reh gai awaaz hamare gale me hi
wo  humpar ilzam laga kar chal diya

usse jine ki khwaish bhi na kar sake hum
jo hume jeete jee maut dekar chal diya......!!!!!
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azeem shab bahut khoob .....dils e daad hazir he ....likhte rahiye
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 15, 2010, 07:15:03 AM
Azeemmmmm.......bht hi kum shabdon me bht gehre dard ko bayaan kar gaye tum.......
Applause Applause Applause Applause

jate hue mud mud k dekhte rahe hum
wo fer k muh ko bas chal diya

use jata dekh kar rok bhi na sake hum
wo zakhm kuch aisa dekar chal diya

ghut kar reh gai awaaz hamare gale me hi
wo  humpar ilzam laga kar chal diya

usse jine ki khwaish bhi na kar sake hum
jo hume jeete jee maut dekar chal diya......!!!!!

Bohat Achche Anamika Ji and thanks for comments
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 15, 2010, 07:32:33 AM
azeem shab bahut khoob .....dils e daad hazir he ....likhte rahiye

Shukriya Abhi Ji

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Azeem mere paas to lafz hi nahin hain aapki is nazm ke liye
bohat bohat bohat khoob likha hai apne....
Allah aapko sada khush aur aabaad rakhe'in AMEEN!!!
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