jab bhee naghmoN me ...........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on October 12, 2010, 09:29:28 AM
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Jab bhee naghmoN me teraa naam rawaaN hotaa hai
dard aNgd.ai liye dil me jawaaN hotaa hai

rooth kar bijali na dil par to girao dilbar
ik tabassum se hi shaad jahaaN hotaa hai

hai khataa meri to kya deNge sazaayeN mujhko
hum se jeete bhee haiN to marne ka gumaaN hotaa hai

apni nazareN to uthaa dekh kahaaN pyaar naheeN?
hai bahaaroN kaa sama tune jahaaN dekhaa hai

phool hi phool khile ziqr e mohabbat me sadaa
tapte sahraa me bhee aab rawaaN hotaa hai

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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 09:35:53 AM »
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bahooooooooooottttttttttt khubbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

lajab jawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab    no words to say anything
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 09:36:43 AM »
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bahut bahut badhiya likha he mamta jiiiii...dher saari daaaad~
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 06:38:45 PM »
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Mamtaa jee aadaab!

Bade dino bad aapke kisi kalaam per reply kar raheN hai .....
Aapke kalaam per reply karna humare to bus ki baat nahi per hum hai naa ke gustaque karne se baaz nahi aate... Usual Smile tongue3

Chaliye aapki kalaam per aate hai..... Usual Smile         


Quote from: mamta bajpai on October 12, 2010, 09:29:28 AM
Jab bhee naghmoN me teraa naam rawaaN hotaa hai
dard aNgd.ai liye dil me jawaaN hotaa hai

Kia matla kaha hai Mamta jee bahut khoob daad hazir hai .... daad           


rooth kar bijali na dil par to girao dilbar
ik tabassum se hi shaad jahaaN hotaa hai

Pahela misra kuch ajeeb sa uljha hai "Naa" lafz ke bad se... aap use aur koi jagaa dijiye... sher achcha hai daad Usual Smile

Aik surat aisi huyi,

"Rooth kar bijali to dil par na giraao dilber"

hai khataa meri to kya deNge sazaayeN mujhko
hum se jeete bhee haiN to marne ka gumaaN hotaa hai

Dusra misra uljha hua hai jisse sher ka khayaal o mafoom saaf zahir naho ho raha hai shayad humari kam akhali ho... per jo laga hume so kah diye...           


apni nazareN to uthaa dekh kahaaN pyaar naheeN?
hai bahaaroN kaa sama tune jahaaN dekhaa hai

hmm sher behad umdaa hai jee.... Daad daad daad Usual Smile         


phool hi phool khile ziqr e mohabbat me sadaa
tapte sahraa me bhee aab rawaaN hotaa hai

MisroN meiN rabt nazar nahi aayi hume.. pata nahi kyuN per jab aap pahele misre meiN mohobbat e zikra se bahaar ki baat ki hai to dusre misre ke aab ne uljha diya hai...           


Mamta Bajpai

Mamtaa jee gar koi gustaqi huyi ho to dil se mazarrat chahte hai.... per aapki is gazl ne hume jyada mutacir nahi kiya ......

Khair.. Likhati rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2010, 04:35:57 PM »
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Parwaz jee ,
            Namaskaar o aadaab,
                              Apni gazal par aap ke tabsire ka hume shiddat se intezar rahtaa hai.yaqeen janiye aisa lagta hai keh koi to hai jo aaina dikhaataa hai.sabse achchi baat ye hai keh aap ki saafgoi se hum behad mutacir haiN.bina laag lapet ke jo bhee mahsoos kiya kah diya.hume aap se bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai.aaiye ab apne kalaam par aaye
aap ne doosre sher kee jo surat pesh kee woh zyada theek hai .shukriya....3rd shair me doosara misra hai woh ekbaargee to uljha huaa lagtaa hai lekin mafhoom jan-ne ke baad aap ko aisa naheeN lagega...matlab ye hai keh sazaayeN to sirf zinda ko hee dee jaa sakti haiN.... maqte me ye bayaan kiya gaya hai keh badi ajeeb see baat hai jab bhee mohabbat ka ziqra aataa hai phool hee phool khil uth-te haiN, aisa lagta haitapte hue sahra me pani ke chashme phoot pade hoN...ye sirf roomani kalpana ki baat hai...ummeed hai mafhoom samajh gaye hoNge....apni koshisheN zaree rakhte hue koi gazal phir pesh karooNgee.bahut bahut shukriyaa gazal kaa sateek tabsira karne ke liye.....
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2010, 01:43:34 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Abhi!
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2010, 01:45:17 PM »
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Rahi jee shairi ki rahoN me saath nibhane ka behad shukriya!
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