JAB BHI MILTA HAI MUJHSE

by soudagar on October 25, 2012, 03:45:12 AM
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yun chhoti si mulaqat mein baat dil ki kahunga kaise,
 k samndar ki tishangi ko, shabnm se  bharunga kaise....

 jab bhi milta hai mujhse  to kitni khushi mujhe de jaata hai,
 ab bichhad raha hai to bata de ki yeh gam sahunga kaise.......

bhul jaane ki koshishe bhi hai , tujhe paane ki hasratein bhi,
 dono kaam mushkil hain, chhoti is umar mein karunga kaise..

 tu masoom hi itna hai, har koi tujhko sahi samjhtaa hai,
 mera dil bhi yahi kehta hai, tujhpe ilzam dharunga kaise..

 khawab hai kitne pure karne, khawahishein kitni baqi hain,
 aakhir itni saree batein adhuri chhodkar main marunga kaise....
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2012, 04:17:38 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2012, 06:50:49 AM »
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yun chhoti si mulaqat mein baat dil ki kahunga kaise,
 k samndar ki tishangi ko, shabnm se  bharunga kaise....

 jab bhi milta hai mujhse  to kitni khushi mujhe de jaata hai,
 ab bichhad raha hai to bata de ki yeh gam sahunga kaise.......

bhul jaane ki koshishe bhi hai , tujhe paane ki hasratein bhi,
 dono kaam mushkil hain, chhoti is umar mein karunga kaise..

 tu masoom hi itna hai, har koi tujhko sahi samjhtaa hai,
 mera dil bhi yahi kehta hai, tujhpe ilzam dharunga kaise..

 khawab hai kitne pure karne, khawahishein kitni baqi hain,
 aakhir itni saree batein adhuri chhodkar main marunga kaise....



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Saudagar Jee Aadaab!


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