jab ped se patte chad gaye...................

by pawan16 on March 21, 2012, 10:54:43 AM
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jab ped se patte chad gaye,
sabne dekha usse,par sab mud gaye,
waqt badla ,mausam badla,
phir se us ped ke patte uag gaye,
dekhte hi dekhte phir sab usse jud gaye,
tu kyu pareshan hota hai dost,
waqt yaha jab acha aya,
uske aage ache-ache insaan jhuk gaye,
phoolo ko yaha jisne todne ki koshish ki,
aksar use yaha kaate chub gaye ...............pawan
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2012, 11:01:37 AM »
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Pawan ji ek bahut achhe shaayarRajgopal singh kee ek panktee yaad aa rahee hai "ugte sooraj ko log jal denge". aap kee aaj kee peshkash bahut gahraai liye hue hai harek ke samajh men naheen aayegee .mujhe bahut achhee lagee.aapko haardik shubhkaamnaayen.
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 11:50:54 AM »
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bohut gehre hai khayal mein
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«Reply #3 on: March 22, 2012, 04:21:07 AM »
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thanks  saniji...................sirji bhut khobb lines hai....bas yu hi apka saath chaiyie.
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2012, 04:22:15 AM »
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sahil ji apne poem ko pasand kiya........apka bhut bhut sukriya
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