Jab Se Tum Gaye Ho...............Kash

by Sanjeev kash on August 06, 2011, 10:12:15 AM
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Jab Se Tum Gaye Ho
love9 love9 love9 love9
Aapki Yaad Mein Aahee..n Bharta Hain
Har Saans Saans Pe Tujhe Yaad Karte Hain

Intzaar Mein bicha rakhi hai aankhen Teri Rah Par
Duaoo.n mein Roj Khuda se Tuje manga Karte Hain

Rahe to salamat chahe Kahi..n Bhi Rahe
Har Waqt Dil se ye socha karte hai

Raat bhar jalti rehti hai shama tere khyaloo ki
Har seher phir tera intzar karte hai

Hai to bahut  jo aashna hai mujh se yahaa..n
Phir Bhi mehfil mein tanha mehsoos karte hai

Aadat si ho gayi hai ab to ye mujhay
Roj ek khat hum issi tarah tere naam likha karte hai

Patta Malum Nahi hai hume iss liye ye Kayal
HAr khat ko gazal bana kar padh diya karte hain..
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2011, 10:21:02 AM »
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Jab Se Tum Gaye Ho
love9 love9 love9 love9
Aapki Yaad Mein Aahe Bharta Hain
Har Saans Saans Pe Tujhe Yaad Karte Hain

Intzaar Mein bicha rakhi hai aankhen Teri Rah Par
Duaoo mein  Roj Khuda se Tuje manga Karte Hain

Rahe to salamat chahe Kahi..n Bhi Rahe
Har Waqt Dil se ye socha karte hai

Raat bhar jalti rehti hai shama tere khyaloo ki
Har seher phir tera intzar karte hai

Hain to bahut  jo aashna hai mujh se yahaa..n
Phir Bhi mehfil mein tanha mehsoos karte hai

Aadat si ho gayi hai ab to ye mujhay
Roj ek khat hum issi tarah tere naam likha karte hai

Patta Malum Nahi hai hume iss liye ye Kayal
HAr khat ko gazal bana kar padh diya karte hain..



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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2011, 01:41:01 PM »
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bahut Khoob Kashji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2011, 08:13:32 PM »
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Sanjeev Jee Aadaab!

Janab ahsaas O khayaal behad khoob rahe aapki is
kalaam ke aur ashaar bhi achche rahe daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile

Kuch khaamiyaaN jo khatki so aapki ijaazat maankar
hum aapko bataana chaheNge Usual Smile

Aapki Yaad Mein Aahe Bharte Hain
Har Saans Saans Pe Tujhe Yaad Karte Hain
          


Jaise yeH aapki kalaam ka pahela sher hai... Is ki paheli line
meiN aapne Apne mehboob ko aap kah kar darshaya hai Usual Smile
WahiN duji line meiN use tuu kah diyaa, It's not fair..

Uski alaamat ko puri kalaam tak waise hi darshaya jata hai..
Aur dusri baat ke aapne jo matla kaha hai technicali perfect hai.. Jaise humne blue kiya hai woH kafiyaa kahlata hai..

Perfect matching words Usual Smile Ab waise hi kafiye aapko har sher ke
dusri line meiN istemaal karne the par aapne nahi kiye.. Usual Smile

Jisse kalaam ki rhytem bikhar jaati hai ... aur kalaam meiN kuch
mazaa nahi rahta fakhat ahsaas O khayaal ke Usual Smile

Ummid hai aap humari baat samjheN hoN... Gar koi gustaqui huyi hai..
To hum tahe dil se mazzarat khuwaaN haiN... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Koshish jaari rakhiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khdua Hafez Usual Smile
        

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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2011, 06:53:23 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Adil Ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2011, 08:07:35 AM »
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bahut Khoob Kashji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Husla Afzai KE liye Shukriya Khwaish Ji
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