Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare "Khwaish"

by khwaish on January 15, 2011, 09:34:13 AM
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Qatl Hua Hai Armaano Ka Kuch Iss Kadar Lekin,
Dil Mein Abhi kuch Tamanayon Ka Nishaan Baaki Hai

Haqeeqat Ki Duniya Daraati Bahut Hai Mujhe!!!
Palkon Par Abhi kuch Khwaabo Ka Samaan Baaki Hai

Chalo Phir Se Ek Nayi Duniya Talaashe Hum!!!
Dil Mein Abhi Mohabbat Ka Jahaan Baaki Hai

Aaj Khushiyon Ka Bazaar Mehanga Bahut Hai Lekin Koi Afsos Nahi!!
Kal Khareedenge Isse, Dil Mein ABhi Ghamo Ki Dukaan Baaki Hai

Sirf Chalte Rehne Se Zindagi Ka Safar Taye Nahi Hota!!!
"Khwaish" Tujhse Abhi Umeedo Ka Aasmaan Baaki Hai

Nahi Qaabil yeh Ghazal Kisi Bhi Mehfil ke Lekin,
Mujhe Guungunane Do!!!Abhi Haathon Mein Mere Jaam Baaki Hai

"Khwaish" Lafzon Mein Jo Naa Zaahir Kar Sako To Naa Sahi!!!!!
Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare, Waha Nazron Ki Zubaan Baaki Hai

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2011, 09:40:22 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2011, 09:42:41 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 15, 2011, 09:40:22 AM
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Inn Icons Ke Liye Teh Dil se Shukriya Anuji..

Par Kabhi Bhi Icons Se Zyaada Lafz Ehmiyat Rakhte Hai... icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2011, 09:50:54 AM »
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wah khwaish ji wah......

maja aa gaya ji........bahot hi behtareen poetry he ........

specially last ke 4,5,6,7 para.....zabardast he .....

congrats and thx for sharing this lovely poetry
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2011, 09:54:35 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 15, 2011, 09:42:41 AM
Inn Icons Ke Liye Teh Dil se Shukriya Anuji..

Par Kabhi Bhi Icons Se Zyaada Lafz Ehmiyat Rakhte Hai... icon_flower
lafz bhi aayenge khwaish ji..ye to aapki post dekhke khush khush ho gaye isly icons daale
lafzon ka wait kijiye ji...par abhi to aapne kaha k jahan lafz kaam na aayen wahan koi aur tarika bhi hota hai khudko express karne ka..to humne usi tarah khudko express kiya ji...
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2011, 09:56:12 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2011, 10:41:17 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob Dost mere..
Kya baat hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2011, 10:44:54 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on January 15, 2011, 09:50:54 AM
wah khwaish ji wah......

maja aa gaya ji........bahot hi behtareen poetry he ........

specially last ke 4,5,6,7 para.....zabardast he .....

congrats and thx for sharing this lovely poetry

Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Mere BhaiJo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..

Yuhi Saath Dete rahiyega Uthkarshji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2011, 11:45:11 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 15, 2011, 09:34:13 AM
Qatl Hua Hai Armaano Ka Kuch Iss Kadar Lekin,
Dil Mein Abhi kuch Tamanayon Ka Nishaan Baaki Hai

Haqeeqat Ki Duniya Daraati Bahut Hai Mujhe!!!
Palkon Par Abhi kuch Khwaabo Ka Samaan Baaki Hai

Chalo Phir Se Ek Nayi Duniya Talaashe Hum!!!
Dil Mein Abhi Mohabbat Ka Jahaan Baaki Hai

Aaj Khushiyon Ka Bazaar Mehanga Bahut Hai Lekin Koi Afsos Nahi!!
Kal Khareedenge Isse, Dil Mein ABhi Ghamo Ki Dukaan Baaki Hai

Sirf Chalte Rehne Se Zindagi Ka Safar Taye Nahi Hota!!!
"Khwaish" Tujhse Abhi Umeedo Ka Aasmaan Baaki Hai

Nahi Qaabil yeh Ghazal Kisi Bhi Mehfil ke Lekin,
Mujhe Guungunane Do!!!Abhi Haathon Mein Mere Jaam Baaki Hai

"Khwaish" Lafzon Mein Jo Naa Zaahir Kar Sako To Naa Sahi!!!!!
Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare, Waha Nazron Ki Zubaan Baaki Hai

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
  lahron ke thapedo se kyon darta hai khawaish,
  khamosh samander mein toofaan abhi baqi hai


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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2011, 02:20:33 PM »
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kis kalam ka use karte ho Brother--??
ehsaas aur shabd kahan se laate ho Bhaiya--??
dard ki chahsni me doobote kaise ho Sirji--??
aur iss behtareen tareke se Sajate kaise ho Saheb--??
Masha allah aise hi likhiye bas.
khus aabaad rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #10 on: January 16, 2011, 12:56:15 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 15, 2011, 09:54:35 AM
lafz bhi aayenge khwaish ji..ye to aapki post dekhke khush khush ho gaye isly icons daale
lafzon ka wait kijiye ji...par abhi to aapne kaha k jahan lafz kaam na aayen wahan koi aur tarika bhi hota hai khudko express karne ka..to humne usi tarah khudko express kiya ji...

Acha!!! Humari Baat Hum par Hi tongue3

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Quote from: nirala on January 15, 2011, 09:56:12 AM
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«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2011, 01:41:02 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 16, 2011, 02:01:51 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 15, 2011, 10:41:17 AM
Bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob Dost mere..
Kya baat hai..
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Khush rahiye..!

Tehhhhhh Dillllllll Se Shukriya mere Bhai..

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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2011, 02:06:21 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai janab ...
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe..

Ahsaas O khayaal bhi behad achche rahe..
Daad kabool kijiye...

Aise hi likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile

          
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