Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: January 16, 2011, 03:13:03 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 15, 2011, 09:34:13 AM
Qatl Hua Hai Armaano Ka Kuch Iss Kadar Lekin,
Dil Mein Abhi kuch Tamanayon Ka Nishaan Baaki Hai

Haqeeqat Ki Duniya Daraati Bahut Hai Mujhe!!!
Palkon Par Abhi kuch Khwaabo Ka Samaan Baaki Hai

Chalo Phir Se Ek Nayi Duniya Talaashe Hum!!!
Dil Mein Abhi Mohabbat Ka Jahaan Baaki Hai

Aaj Khushiyon Ka Bazaar Mehanga Bahut Hai Lekin Koi Afsos Nahi!!
Kal Khareedenge Isse, Dil Mein ABhi Ghamo Ki Dukaan Baaki Hai

Sirf Chalte Rehne Se Zindagi Ka Safar Taye Nahi Hota!!!
"Khwaish" Tujhse Abhi Umeedo Ka Aasmaan Baaki Hai

Nahi Qaabil yeh Ghazal Kisi Bhi Mehfil ke Lekin,
Mujhe Guungunane Do!!!Abhi Haathon Mein Mere Jaam Baaki Hai

"Khwaish" Lafzon Mein Jo Naa Zaahir Kar Sako To Naa Sahi!!!!!
Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare, Waha Nazron Ki Zubaan Baaki Hai

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut wadiya likheya hai khwaish ji...ik ik lafza dil wich bas gya...
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«Reply #16 on: January 17, 2011, 04:25:00 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on January 15, 2011, 11:45:11 AM
  lahron ke thapedo se kyon darta hai khawaish,
  khamosh samander mein toofaan abhi baqi hai


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Bahut bahut Khoob Khamosh Awaaz Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Sher..

Aur bahut bahut shukriya aapka jo aapne apna waqt diya
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«Reply #17 on: January 17, 2011, 04:41:17 PM »
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khwaish teri kalam ka, intzaar tha kab se,
hum jaise teri ghazlon ke kadardaan baaqi hai,
is behtreen ghazal ke liye bahoot bahoot badhai..bahoot khoob khayalaat hain aapke khwaish bro

thik isi ridam me "TALAT" se inspire ho kar ek ghazal likhi thi yoindia pe aapki nazar

दिल मे नाकाम हसरतों का, तूफान बाक़ी है
बुझ चुके हौसलों मे अब भी जान बाक़ी है

ज़रा ठहरो, मेरी हार का जश्न मानने वालों,
जंग जारी है अभी,एलन-ए-अंजाम बाक़ी है,

मेरी औकात को ना आंको, खाली गिरह को देख-के
खरीद लूँ तुम्हे भी जिससे, वो मेरा ईमान बाक़ी है,

हुई मुद्दत के ना कोई तक़रार हुई तुमसे,
ज़ाहिर है फ़ासले अब भी तेरे-मेरे, दर्मयान बाक़ी है,

तेरे पुराने खतों को पढ़ना अब भी, फिर मुसकराना मेरा,
लगता है इस जिस्म मे अब भी कहीं, इंसान बाक़ी है

किसे ढूँढते हो बेकरार, वो अब यहाँ नही रहता
मस्ज़िदों-मंदिरों मे अब कहाँ, भगवान बाक़ी है,
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«Reply #18 on: January 19, 2011, 01:25:26 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on January 15, 2011, 02:20:33 PM
kis kalam ka use karte ho Brother--??
ehsaas aur shabd kahan se laate ho Bhaiya--??
dard ki chahsni me doobote kaise ho Sirji--??
aur iss behtareen tareke se Sajate kaise ho Saheb--??
Masha allah aise hi likhiye bas.
khus aabaad rahiye
sukriya

Killbill Ji Aapne Itna Kuch keh Diya Ke mere Paas Jawaab Mein Kuch kehne Ke Liye...Bas Itna Hi keh Sakta Hoon, Ke Wahi likhta Hoon Jo Dil kehta Hai, mehsoos Karta Hai..Lafzon Ne Humesha Se Mera Saath diya Hai..

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«Reply #19 on: January 19, 2011, 02:59:50 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 16, 2011, 01:41:02 PM
Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Applause Applause


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«Reply #20 on: January 19, 2011, 03:34:06 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 16, 2011, 02:06:21 PM
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai janab ...
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe..

Ahsaas O khayaal bhi behad achche rahe..
Daad kabool kijiye...

Aise hi likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile

         


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«Reply #21 on: January 29, 2011, 12:37:37 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 16, 2011, 03:13:03 PM
Bahut wadiya likheya hai khwaish ji...ik ik lafza dil wich bas gya...

Thankyou Soooooooo much Geetji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: January 30, 2011, 06:51:34 AM »
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Nahi Qaabil yeh Ghazal Kisi Bhi Mehfil ke Lekin,
Mujhe Guungunane Do!!!Abhi Haathon Mein Mere Jaam Baaki Hai

"Khwaish" Lafzon Mein Jo Naa Zaahir Kar Sako To Naa Sahi!!!!!
Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare, Waha Nazron Ki Zubaan Baaki Hai


Wah Khwaish Ji... Wah... Daad Kubool Kijiye... Kahin Yeh Baaqi Na Reh Jaye...
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«Reply #23 on: January 31, 2011, 03:12:20 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 17, 2011, 04:41:17 PM
khwaish teri kalam ka, intzaar tha kab se,
hum jaise teri ghazlon ke kadardaan baaqi hai,
is behtreen ghazal ke liye bahoot bahoot badhai..bahoot khoob khayalaat hain aapke khwaish bro

thik isi ridam me "TALAT" se inspire ho kar ek ghazal likhi thi yoindia pe aapki nazar

दिल मे नाकाम हसरतों का, तूफान बाक़ी है
बुझ चुके हौसलों मे अब भी जान बाक़ी है

ज़रा ठहरो, मेरी हार का जश्न मानने वालों,
जंग जारी है अभी,एलन-ए-अंजाम बाक़ी है,

मेरी औकात को ना आंको, खाली गिरह को देख-के
खरीद लूँ तुम्हे भी जिससे, वो मेरा ईमान बाक़ी है,

हुई मुद्दत के ना कोई तक़रार हुई तुमसे,
ज़ाहिर है फ़ासले अब भी तेरे-मेरे, दर्मयान बाक़ी है,

तेरे पुराने खतों को पढ़ना अब भी, फिर मुसकराना मेरा,
लगता है इस जिस्म मे अब भी कहीं, इंसान बाक़ी है

किसे ढूँढते हो बेकरार, वो अब यहाँ नही रहता
मस्ज़िदों-मंदिरों मे अब कहाँ, भगवान बाक़ी है,




Sanjeev Bro..Aapka Tehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Dillllllllllll se Shukriya Mere Bhai...Aap Jaise kadardaan Ke Wajeh se Hi Aaj Khwaish Kuch Likhne Ki himmat karta Hai..bas Yuhi Saath dete Rahiyega..

Aur Mere Bhai, Aapki Likhi Koi kalaam Aisi Ho sakti hai Kya Jo Maine Naa Padhi ho..Bahut bahut Khoob mere Bhai..

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«Reply #24 on: January 31, 2011, 04:47:15 PM »
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Ati sunder Gazal hai aapki Khwaishji..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Pahunchi nahi abhee tak kisi bhee manzil par mein
Par abhi tak udaan bharne ko pura aasmaan baaki hai

Maanti hu janaab huye nahi abhi bhi kai sapne poore mere
Par aaj bhi soti hoon tou madhur khwaab rehte hain ghere

Ab nahi darrti mein ess mushkilon se bhare sansaar me kisise
Kay houssle abhi bhee kamjoor nahi huye hain mere aur kisise

Khwaishein jo bhee baakee bachee hain mann mai abhee tak hamaare
Waada he Koyal ka unko mukkamal kiye bina na baithungi ab chain se

Jaanti hoon jahaan mehnat naa kaam kare Nasseb ko ajmaana hai
Jahaan jubaan kay shabd na asar karein,neegaahon se kehnaa hai




Quote from: khwaish on January 15, 2011, 09:34:13 AM
Qatl Hua Hai Armaano Ka Kuch Iss Kadar Lekin,
Dil Mein Abhi kuch Tamanayon Ka Nishaan Baaki Hai

Haqeeqat Ki Duniya Daraati Bahut Hai Mujhe!!!
Palkon Par Abhi kuch Khwaabo Ka Samaan Baaki Hai

Chalo Phir Se Ek Nayi Duniya Talaashe Hum!!!
Dil Mein Abhi Mohabbat Ka Jahaan Baaki Hai

Aaj Khushiyon Ka Bazaar Mehanga Bahut Hai Lekin Koi Afsos Nahi!!
Kal Khareedenge Isse, Dil Mein ABhi Ghamo Ki Dukaan Baaki Hai

Sirf Chalte Rehne Se Zindagi Ka Safar Taye Nahi Hota!!!
"Khwaish" Tujhse Abhi Umeedo Ka Aasmaan Baaki Hai

Nahi Qaabil yeh Ghazal Kisi Bhi Mehfil ke Lekin,
Mujhe Guungunane Do!!!Abhi Haathon Mein Mere Jaam Baaki Hai

"Khwaish" Lafzon Mein Jo Naa Zaahir Kar Sako To Naa Sahi!!!!!
Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare, Waha Nazron Ki Zubaan Baaki Hai

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #25 on: January 31, 2011, 05:55:43 PM »
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Mast kalaam hai aapka Khwaish ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khoob saath diya Sanjeev bhai ji...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koyal ji aapka reply bhi superb hai ji..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: April 11, 2011, 04:26:02 PM »
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Quote from: mrkotians on January 30, 2011, 06:51:34 AM
Nahi Qaabil yeh Ghazal Kisi Bhi Mehfil ke Lekin,
Mujhe Guungunane Do!!!Abhi Haathon Mein Mere Jaam Baaki Hai

"Khwaish" Lafzon Mein Jo Naa Zaahir Kar Sako To Naa Sahi!!!!!
Jahan Lafz Kaam Naa Kare, Waha Nazron Ki Zubaan Baaki Hai


Wah Khwaish Ji... Wah... Daad Kubool Kijiye... Kahin Yeh Baaqi Na Reh Jaye...

Rehan Ji Aapka Tahe Dil se Shukriya Bhai..

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«Reply #27 on: April 18, 2011, 11:15:55 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 31, 2011, 04:47:15 PM
Ati sunder Gazal hai aapki Khwaishji..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Pahunchi nahi abhee tak kisi bhee manzil par mein
Par abhi tak udaan bharne ko pura aasmaan baaki hai

Maanti hu janaab huye nahi abhi bhi kai sapne poore mere
Par aaj bhi soti hoon tou madhur khwaab rehte hain ghere

Ab nahi darrti mein ess mushkilon se bhare sansaar me kisise
Kay houssle abhi bhee kamjoor nahi huye hain mere aur kisise

Khwaishein jo bhee baakee bachee hain mann mai abhee tak hamaare
Waada he Koyal ka unko mukkamal kiye bina na baithungi ab chain se

Jaanti hoon jahaan mehnat naa kaam kare Nasseb ko ajmaana hai
Jahaan jubaan kay shabd na asar karein,neegaahon se kehnaa hai





Aapka Bahut bahut Bahut Shukriya Koyalji..

Aur Sach Mein Aapne Bahut Hi Pyaara Likha hai..

Bahut Ache.. i m really sorry Bahut late Reply kar Raha Hoon par Sach mein yeh Thread Kho Hi Gaya Tha..

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«Reply #28 on: April 18, 2011, 12:05:03 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 17, 2011, 04:41:17 PM
khwaish teri kalam ka, intzaar tha kab se,
hum jaise teri ghazlon ke kadardaan baaqi hai,
is behtreen ghazal ke liye bahoot bahoot badhai..bahoot khoob khayalaat hain aapke khwaish bro

thik isi ridam me "TALAT" se inspire ho kar ek ghazal likhi thi yoindia pe aapki nazar

दिल मे नाकाम हसरतों का, तूफान बाक़ी है
बुझ चुके हौसलों मे अब भी जान बाक़ी है

ज़रा ठहरो, मेरी हार का जश्न मानने वालों,
जंग जारी है अभी,एलन-ए-अंजाम बाक़ी है,

मेरी औकात को ना आंको, खाली गिरह को देख-के
खरीद लूँ तुम्हे भी जिससे, वो मेरा ईमान बाक़ी है,

हुई मुद्दत के ना कोई तक़रार हुई तुमसे,
ज़ाहिर है फ़ासले अब भी तेरे-मेरे, दर्मयान बाक़ी है,

तेरे पुराने खतों को पढ़ना अब भी, फिर मुसकराना मेरा,
लगता है इस जिस्म मे अब भी कहीं, इंसान बाक़ी है

किसे ढूँढते हो बेकरार, वो अब यहाँ नही रहता
मस्ज़िदों-मंदिरों मे अब कहाँ, भगवान बाक़ी है,





bahut khoobsurat kalaam khawish ji aur bekaraar ji
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