jalwaa.........A.B

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                         mitaa kar khud ko.,
                         jalwaa dikhaney ka,
                         main qaayal nahin...!
                         gar yaqeen ho..,
                         to merey alfaaz hi kaafi hain,
                         asar rakhney ko......!! occasion17
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2010, 02:46:50 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on March 10, 2010, 01:30:49 PM
                     
                         khud ko mitaa kar.,
                         jalwaa dikhaney ka,
                         main qaayal nahin...!
                         gar yaqeen ho..,
                         to merey alfaaz hi kaafi hain,
                         asar rakhney ko......!! occasion17
Bahut khoob Bechain ji...maine bhi koshish kiya hai shayad pasand aaye...
                         nihaa hai dar badar jalwaa,
                         mitana kya banana kya?
                         nazar ki baat hai kewal,
                         ayaan hona dikhana kya.
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2010, 04:15:02 AM »
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Good one Adil Ji
N Nice response Pandey Ji
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good adil ji achcha laga aap ka jalwa padh kar."BUSHRA KUSH HUI" Applause Applause
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Bahut khoob Bechain ji...maine bhi koshish kiya hai shayad pasand aaye...
                         nihaa hai dar badar jalwaa,
                         mitana kya banana kya?
                         nazar ki baat hai kewal,
                         ayaan hona dikhana kya.

bahut khoob pandey ji
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Good one Adil Ji
N Nice response Pandey Ji

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good adil ji achcha laga aap ka jalwa padh kar."BUSHRA KUSH HUI" Applause Applause

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Bahut Khooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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