JAMA-E-ZAKHM HAI KI FAT-TA HI JAYE.............MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on June 27, 2010, 05:04:43 PM
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KOI KAHAN TAK PAIBAND RAFOO KARTA JAYE
JAMA-E-ZAKHM HAI KI PHAT-TA HI JAYE

BAANDH LOON YA KI YUN HI CHODA JAYE
DARIYA-E-ASHQ HAI KI BAHTA HI JAYE

PYAAS MILAN KI AUR BHI BADHTI JAYE
UMMEED-E-MAHTAB HAI KI GHAT-TA HI JAYE

YE JASHN YE RAQS YE MEHFIL FIR BHI
VEERANA-E-DIL HAI KI BADHTA HI JAYE
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2010, 05:21:51 PM »
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waaah Mamta ji bahut khoob, kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki aap riste hue zakhmo mein apni kalam ko duba kar kalaam likhti hein... bahut achhi rachna hai yeh.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2010, 09:37:48 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 27, 2010, 05:04:43 PM
KOI KAHAN TAK PAIBAND RAFOO KARTA JAYE
JAMA-E-ZAKHM HAI KI PHAT-TA HI JAYE

BAANDH LOON YA KI YUN HI CHODA JAYE
DARIYA-E-ASHQ HAI KI BADHTA HI JAYE

PYAAS MILAN KI AUR BHI BADHTI JAYE
UMMEED-E-MAHTAB HAI KI GHAT-TA HI JAYE

YE JASHN YE RAQS YE MEHFIL FIR BHI
VEERANA-E-DIL HAI KI BADHTA HI JAYE

khub
ho jaye kisi ke bhi kitna he pass chahe hum
jaruri nahi dard uska hum her jaan hi jaye

is zindgi mei,hai kausis meri jis jaan ko paane ki
ho sakta hai shayed use paane mei meri jaan hi jaye

dikha de use darde zakham saare apne darde dil ke
ho sakta hai use tujh pe shayad raham aa hi jaye
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2010, 09:50:22 AM »
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Wah! Mamta Ji Bahut Khoob likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2010, 11:31:19 AM »
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Bhot nice poetry hai ji. very good. keep riting.
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2010, 12:46:36 PM »
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BAHUT SHUKRIYA MANOJ JI! HAMESHA KI TARAH AAP KA DAAD DENE KA ANDAZ BHI KYA KHOOB HAI.THANKS A LOT.....
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2010, 12:49:00 PM »
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SHIHAB JI AAP KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA!AAP KI NAWAZISH SE KIS KADAR MUTASIR HOON.KYA BATAON.BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2010, 12:54:31 PM »
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HOUSLA AFZAI KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SIDE JI! SACH HI HAI.......
AANSUON KI SIYAHI ME ,PALKON KI KALAM DUBA KAR, DIL KE KAGAZ PAR LIKHI HUI EBARAT HAI YE........
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2010, 12:56:14 PM »
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THANKS RAJESH JI!
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2010, 04:21:47 AM »
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BAHUT SHUKRIYA MANOJ JI! HAMESHA KI TARAH AAP KA DAAD DENE KA ANDAZ BHI KYA KHOOB HAI.THANKS A LOT.....
likh ke dekhe gazel hum bhi jara manoj uski tarah se
kuch nikhar meri shayeri mei bhi shayed aa hi jaye
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2010, 05:14:28 AM »
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bahot khoob mamta saheba ...ek aur shair ka izafa kardeto to ghazal ka haq ada hojata tha...bahot khoob bilkul judagana andaz..
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2010, 11:08:56 AM »
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Bahot khoob Mamta ji. Aapki ye takhleeq ek jiddat liye huye hai. Ye  lines sabse achhi lagi.

PYAAS MILAN KI AUR BHI BADHTI JAYE
UMMEED-E-MAHTAB HAI KI GHAT-TA HI JAYE
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2010, 07:25:49 AM »
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thanks a lot Riyazji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2010, 10:08:56 AM »
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Mamta-di Bahoot khoobsurat khayaal aur sunder shabdo ka chayan.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Zakhmo ki baarish hai,milta nahi marham
Zulmo ki behisaab ginti,kaise kiye he karm



Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 27, 2010, 05:04:43 PM
KOI KAHAN TAK PAIBAND RAFOO KARTA JAYE
JAMA-E-ZAKHM HAI KI PHAT-TA HI JAYE

BAANDH LOON YA KI YUN HI CHODA JAYE
DARIYA-E-ASHQ HAI KI BAHTA HI JAYE

PYAAS MILAN KI AUR BHI BADHTI JAYE
UMMEED-E-MAHTAB HAI KI GHAT-TA HI JAYE

YE JASHN YE RAQS YE MEHFIL FIR BHI
VEERANA-E-DIL HAI KI BADHTA HI JAYE
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«Reply #14 on: July 02, 2010, 04:54:21 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB KOYALJI!
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