Janaaza parha do (NM)

by vb on May 21, 2010, 04:10:15 PM

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anush

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2010, 04:14:14 PM »

bahut khoob vb .. !!


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2010, 04:48:18 PM »

DARD KE KITNE SAMANDAR PAAR KAR LIYE AAP NE? OH GOD!


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2010, 04:53:40 PM »

AISA LAGTA HAI JAISE AANSOON KI SIYAHI ME DUBOTE HUE PALAKON KI QAKAM SE DIL KE KAGAZ PAR KOI DARD BAHI TAHREER BADE DARD SE LIKHI GAYEE HO.


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2010, 05:20:25 PM »

VBJI KHUSH RAHEN .MERI DUAYEN AAPKE SAATH HAIN.


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2010, 06:48:47 PM »

jsi lay aur tarranum se aapne yeh peshkash ki hai jannab vb ji paana khoobsurat ho gaya. Aapko is naayab rachna ke liye shubhkaamnaye.


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anokhiladli

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2010, 11:32:06 PM »

furqat ko wasal ker dea hay
to nay to nihal ker dea hay
aanso he nahee marizay dil ko
her zeher ubal ker dea hay

kai bat hay,buhat achi ghazal likhi ap nay.bar bar perha or her bar lutaf aya.aik or bat
beetay dino say na sergoshian karo
aisa na ho k umer i rawan bolnay lagay


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arifuddin

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2010, 03:29:22 PM »

dil me utar gai aapki Baat shukriya jo share kiya hum logon ke sath


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Janaaza parha do (by vb)

«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2010, 03:52:45 PM »

Bahut khoob vb Ji,
You are writing very smart
Ghazal pasand aayee
Hum bhi achchhi shayari ke kadardaan hain, tarif karte rahange,
Ghazal section me SARVESH RASTOGI ke naam se hamari kafi ghazalen mil jaengi, mauka lage to gaur farmaiye.
You have command over words and thoughts, keep it up, fine
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI