JANAM JANAM KAA SAATH (4 Liner)..... "MohaN"

by surindarn on December 02, 2015, 05:09:33 AM
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JAANAM JANAM KAA SAATH.

Woh unhein akelaa chorhh kar sadah ke liye chalaa gayaa hai,
Kehtaa to bahut thaa ke janam janam kaa saath nibhaaye gaa…
Sunaa bahut hai sab laut ke aatey hain, lekin dekhaa kis ne hai,
Dekhun gaa ke woh abb kaa chipaa kab ghoongat uthhaaye gaa!!

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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2015, 06:24:00 AM »
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Sorry to say, but rubai me pahle, dosre aur caothe misre ka ‘radif’ aur ‘qhafia’ same hota hai Usual Smile

Anyway akhri line ke 'kab ghoongat uthhaaye gaa' se kisi ka likha yaad aaya, wo kahete hain ke...
Deedar ki talab hai to nazren jamae rakh
Chilman ho ya naqhab sarakte zaroor hain Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2015, 03:48:54 PM »
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Rangila Jee bahut shukria merii galtee bataaney ke liye, main ne ussey theek kar diyaa hai. Daad ke liye shukria.
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«Reply #3 on: December 04, 2015, 01:41:27 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on December 02, 2015, 05:09:33 AM
JAANAM JANAM KAA SAATH.

Woh unhein akelaa chorhh kar sadah ke liye chalaa gayaa hai,
Kehtaa to bahut thaa ke janam janam kaa saath nibhaaye gaa…
Sunaa bahut hai sab laut ke aatey hain, lekin dekhaa kis ne hai,
Dekhun gaa ke woh abb kaa chipaa kab ghoongat uthhaaye gaa!!

Surindar. S                                          "MohaN"
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2015, 03:31:20 PM »
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Quote from: surindarn on December 04, 2015, 01:41:27 AM

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