JAWANI ADHURI HO......SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on November 02, 2012, 11:12:59 AM
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Mere dost vinay ke kuch words jinhe qalaam ka roop dene ki koshish...


dulhan ka roop aur nikhar jaata hai
jab dulhan ki mang sinduri ho

ishq karne ka maza tab aata hai
jab dono taraf ishq ki aag puri ho

pyar mein rooh ka milan tabhi hota hai
jab dono dilon kee puri manjuri ho

aakhon se batein hoti hai ishq mein
lab to bas wahi bolte h jo jruri ho

ishq aur jyada parwan chadhta hai
jab dil kreeb jismon mein duri ho

bina ishq ke gar jawani beet jaye
to lagta hai jaise jawani adhuri ho
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2012, 11:17:50 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2012, 12:29:02 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on November 02, 2012, 11:12:59 AM
Mere dost vinay i kahi panktiyan


dulhan ka roop aur nikhar jaata hai
jab dulhan ki mang sinduri ho

ishq karne ka maza tab aata hai
jab dono taraf ishq ki aag puri ho

pyar mein rooh ka milan tabhi hota hai
jab dono dilon kee puri manjuri ho

aakhon se batein hoti hai ishq mein
lab to bas wahi bolte h jo jruri ho

ishq aur jyada parwan chadhta hai
jab dil kreeb jismon mein duri ho

bina ishq ke gar jawani beet jaye
to aisa lagta hai jawani adhuri ho






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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2012, 02:25:46 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on November 02, 2012, 11:12:59 AM
Mere dost vinay ke kuch words jinhe qalaam ka roop dene ki koshish...


dulhan ka roop aur nikhar jaata hai
jab dulhan ki mang sinduri ho

ishq karne ka maza tab aata hai
jab dono taraf ishq ki aag puri ho

pyar mein rooh ka milan tabhi hota hai
jab dono dilon kee puri manjuri ho

aakhon se batein hoti hai ishq mein
lab to bas wahi bolte h jo jruri ho

ishq aur jyada parwan chadhta hai
jab dil kreeb jismon mein duri ho

bina ishq ke gar jawani beet jaye
to lagta hai jaise jawani adhuri ho





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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2012, 04:24:24 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on November 02, 2012, 11:12:59 AM
Mere dost vinay ke kuch words jinhe qalaam ka roop dene ki koshish...


dulhan ka roop aur nikhar jaata hai
jab dulhan ki mang sinduri ho

ishq karne ka maza tab aata hai
jab dono taraf ishq ki aag puri ho

pyar mein rooh ka milan tabhi hota hai
jab dono dilon kee puri manjuri ho

aakhon se batein hoti hai ishq mein
lab to bas wahi bolte h jo jruri ho

ishq aur jyada parwan chadhta hai
jab dil kreeb jismon mein duri ho

bina ishq ke gar jawani beet jaye
to lagta hai jaise jawani adhuri ho




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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2012, 05:08:03 PM »
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verii nice poetry
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Quote from: soudagar on November 02, 2012, 11:12:59 AM
Mere dost vinay ke kuch words jinhe qalaam ka roop dene ki koshish...


dulhan ka roop aur nikhar jaata hai
jab dulhan ki mang sinduri ho

ishq karne ka maza tab aata hai
jab dono taraf ishq ki aag puri ho

pyar mein rooh ka milan tabhi hota hai
jab dono dilon kee puri manjuri ho

aakhon se batein hoti hai ishq mein
lab to bas wahi bolte h jo jruri ho

ishq aur jyada parwan chadhta hai
jab dil kreeb jismon mein duri ho

bina ishq ke gar jawani beet jaye
to lagta hai jaise jawani adhuri ho



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