jazbaatoN ki DHUND, galatfehmiyoN ka KUHASAA...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 14, 2012, 05:35:28 PM
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JazbaatoN ki dhuNd, GalatfehfiyoN ka kuhasaa,
Vo mujhse, maiN unse rahuN kuch khafaa sa.

Jismaani bhookh mitayeN sab ishq ke naam pe,
Kuch aisa dekha maine mohabbat ka tamaasha.

Vo thi gulaab ke kaliyoN ki ek komal pankhudii,
MaiN oos ki booNdoN ki tarah liptaa huaa sa.

Darr lagne lagta hai apna aapa khone ka mujhe,
Jab kabhi bhi aati hai vo mere qareeb zaraa sa.

Har ehsaash me hai itni milaawat is duniya me,
Ki gulshan me rahe 'Taish' kisi kali ka pyasaa.

14/11/12
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2012, 12:29:14 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2012, 01:23:03 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on November 14, 2012, 05:35:28 PM
JazbaatoN ki dhuNd, GalatfehfiyoN ka kuhasaa,
Vo mujhse, maiN unse rahuN kuch khafaa sa.

Jismaani bhookh mitayeN sab ishq ke naam pe,
Kuch aisa dekha maine mohabbat ka tamaasha.

Vo thi gulaab ke kaliyoN ki ek komal pankhudii,
MaiN oos ki booNdoN ki tarah liptaa huaa sa.

Darr lagne lagta hai apna aapa khone ka mujhe,
Jab kabhi bhi aati hai vo mere qareeb zaraa sa.

Har ehsaash me hai itni milaawat is duniya me,
Ki gulshan me rahe 'Taish' kisi kali ka pyasaa.

14/11/12
bohut khoob taish jee umda ghazal hai. daaad qubool karen
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2012, 02:38:07 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on November 14, 2012, 05:35:28 PM
JazbaatoN ki dhuNd, GalatfehfiyoN ka kuhasaa,
Vo mujhse, maiN unse rahuN kuch khafaa sa.

Jismaani bhookh mitayeN sab ishq ke naam pe,
Kuch aisa dekha maine mohabbat ka tamaasha.

Vo thi gulaab ke kaliyoN ki ek komal pankhudii,
MaiN oos ki booNdoN ki tarah liptaa huaa sa.

Darr lagne lagta hai apna aapa khone ka mujhe,
Jab kabhi bhi aati hai vo mere qareeb zaraa sa.

Har ehsaash me hai itni milaawat is duniya me,
Ki gulshan me rahe 'Taish' kisi kali ka pyasaa.

14/11/12
nice
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«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2012, 07:07:32 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on November 15, 2012, 12:29:14 AM
bahut khoob

shukriya bahukhandi sahab, yunhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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Quote from: Aarish on November 15, 2012, 01:23:03 AM
bohut khoob taish jee umda ghazal hai. daaad qubool karen

shukriya aarish sahab, yunhi saath nibhaate rahiye... Usual Smile
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on November 15, 2012, 02:38:07 AM
nice


thanks a lot frnd...
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wah wah
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Quote from: aqsh on November 15, 2012, 11:41:05 AM
bahut khoob

shukriya aqsh sahab... Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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Quote from: prashad on November 16, 2012, 01:22:00 AM
wah wah

prashad ji pasand karne ka shukriya, yunhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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waah taish sahab bohut khub likha hai aapne
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Quote from: saahill on November 17, 2012, 03:37:05 AM
waah taish sahab bohut khub likha hai aapne

saahil ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya, yuNhi saath dete raheN aap... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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