~*~ Jazbaton ko dekhlo ~*~ by Rahim

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Nazmon main lavzon ko parrna asan hai,
Mager lavzon main bhare, unn ehsaason ko dekhlo..

Ki jo usne bewaffai toh dil ko khata hogayi us’se,
Mager nafraton main dabi,unn  mohobaton ko dekhlo..

Mana iss duniya ki bheed mein jism kay bhooke kayi hai,
Mager janwaron main rehte, unn insaanon ko dekhlo..

Aj tham liya, kal thukra diya, yeh toh reet hai duniya walon ki,
Mager khoklon kay beech chipe, unn dilon ko dekhlo..

Jo sachi mohobat karke toote, uska dil qabrastan hojata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager qabron main dafan, unn armanon ko dekhlo..

Log meri ankhon main jhank kar dil kay raaz jan’na chahte hai,
Mager bahe hai jo raazon kay sabab, unn ashkon ko dekhlo..

‘Khamosh’ toh jaise bhi karke apne dil ki baaton ko lavz deta rahega,
Ek apne hi alag andaaz main, ehsaason ko bikherta rahega,
Mager tum lavzon ki khamiyon main base, unn jazbaaton ko dekhlo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2011, 04:22:19 PM »
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haaye…
ye kya likh dia dost…

jaan lelo yar…

isme mai kya cmnt karu ab
khus rahiye ji
““
duayen le lo bepanaah humse ki
ab to kuch bhi nahi mere paas dene ko tujhe
““
thanx
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2011, 04:54:13 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat likha hai rahiim..
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2011, 06:19:20 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on May 02, 2011, 04:22:19 PM
haaye…
ye kya likh dia dost…

jaan lelo yar…

isme mai kya cmnt karu ab
khus rahiye ji
““
duayen le lo bepanaah humse ki
ab to kuch bhi nahi mere paas dene ko tujhe
““
thanx
Duaein sabse zada ehmiat rakhti hai dost..
Apne bahaut kehdia na kehkar..
Bahaut bahaut dil se shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2011, 06:27:44 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 02, 2011, 04:54:13 PM
Bahut khubsurat likha hai rahiim..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2011, 06:39:38 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 02, 2011, 06:19:20 PM
Duaein sabse zada ehmiat rakhti hai dost..
Apne bahaut kehdia na kehkar..
Bahaut bahaut dil se shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
aapka sukriya dost…
khus rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2011, 06:39:54 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 02, 2011, 06:19:20 PM
Duaein sabse zada ehmiat rakhti hai dost..
Apne bahaut kehdia na kehkar..
Bahaut bahaut dil se shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
aapka sukriya dost…
khus rahiye
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2011, 08:03:31 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 02, 2011, 06:55:05 PM
Bahut Khub Bhai Rahim...


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Shihab bhaijan iss izzat kay liye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2011, 08:06:23 PM »
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Aadaab Janab Raheem Sahaab!

Kia baat hai janab ... kia khoob ahsaas O
Khyaal piroye hai aapne.... Usual Smile Sabhi ashaar
behad khoob aur umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2011, 08:20:09 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 02, 2011, 08:06:23 PM
Aadaab Janab Raheem Sahaab!

Kia baat hai janab ... kia khoob ahsaas O
Khyaal piroye hai aapne.... Usual Smile Sabhi ashaar
behad khoob aur umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Parwaaz jee..
Bas yunhi hausla badate rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2011, 05:30:37 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 02, 2011, 03:02:14 PM
Nazmon main lavzon ko parrna asan hai,
Mager lavzon main bhare, unn ehsaason ko dekhlo..

Ki jo usne bewaffai toh dil ko khata hogayi us’se,
Mager nafraton main dabi,unn  mohobaton ko dekhlo..

Mana iss duniya ki bheed mein jism kay bhooke kayi hai,
Mager janwaron main rehte, unn insaanon ko dekhlo..

Aj tham liya, kal thukra diya, yeh toh reet hai duniya walon ki,
Mager khoklon kay beech chipe, unn dilon ko dekhlo..

Jo sachi mohobat karke toote, uska dil qabrastan hojata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager qabron main dafan, unn armanon ko dekhlo..

Log meri ankhon main jhank kar dil kay raaz jan’na chahte hai,
Mager bahe hai jo raazon kay sabab, unn ashkon ko dekhlo..

‘Khamosh’ toh jaise bhi karke apne dil ki baaton ko lavz deta rahega,
Ek apne hi alag andaaz main, ehsaason ko bikherta rahega,
Mager tum lavzon ki khamiyon main base, unn jazbaaton ko dekhlo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

good one
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2011, 06:11:57 AM »
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bht behtareen alfaz kehe,

 love9 love9 love9 love9
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2011, 09:43:33 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 03, 2011, 05:30:37 AM
good one
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sheba jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: Nooruddin Noor on May 03, 2011, 06:11:57 AM
bht behtareen alfaz kehe,

 love9 love9 love9 love9
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Noor jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2011, 09:56:21 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 02, 2011, 03:02:14 PM
Nazmon main lavzon ko parrna asan hai,
Mager lavzon main bhare, unn ehsaason ko dekhlo..

Ki jo usne bewaffai toh dil ko khata hogayi us’se,
Mager nafraton main dabi,unn  mohobaton ko dekhlo..

Mana iss duniya ki bheed mein jism kay bhooke kayi hai,
Mager janwaron main rehte, unn insaanon ko dekhlo..

Aj tham liya, kal thukra diya, yeh toh reet hai duniya walon ki,
Mager khoklon kay beech chipe, unn dilon ko dekhlo..

Jo sachi mohobat karke toote, uska dil qabrastan hojata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager qabron main dafan, unn armanon ko dekhlo..

Log meri ankhon main jhank kar dil kay raaz jan’na chahte hai,
Mager bahe hai jo raazon kay sabab, unn ashkon ko dekhlo..

‘Khamosh’ toh jaise bhi karke apne dil ki baaton ko lavz deta rahega,
Ek apne hi alag andaaz main, ehsaason ko bikherta rahega,
Mager tum lavzon ki khamiyon main base, unn jazbaaton ko dekhlo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

waah Waah Waah!!!!

Aapki lekhni Padhne Ke Liye Dil Ki Nazar bahut zaroori Hoti hai..Kyonki har Lafz Dil se Nikla Hua Hota hai..

bahut bahut Khoob Bhai rahim...Har ek sher Lajawaab

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