-----/// Jee karta hai /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on March 19, 2012, 02:06:36 PM
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un dino me laut ke jaane ka jee karta hai,
firse tujhe apna banaane ka jee karta hai,

chhupke zamaane se hum milte the tujhse,
tera chhupke milne aana yaad aata hai,
mujhe dekh ke tera rang nikhar jaata tha,
mujhe dekh tera muskuraana yaad aata hai,

firse tere sang muskuraane ka jee karta hai,
firse tujhe apna banaane ka jee karta hai,

raat si kaali zulfen bikherti thi tu mujhpe,
tera mere seene se lipat jaana yaad aata hai,
gulaabi honth tere kamal ke phool jaise,
mera tere hothon ko chum lena yaad aata hai,

firse tere hothon ko chhoone ka jee karta hai,
firse tujhe apna banaane ka mera jee karta hai,

jaate jaate ye kahaa tha ki laut aayegi tu,
tera wo duur jaata huwa chehra yaad aata hai,
main un raahon pe aankhen bichhaye baitha hoon,
un raahon pe mujhe tera chehra nazar aata hai,

firse tujhe paane ka mera jee karta hai,
firse tujhe apna banaane ka jee karta hai...


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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2012, 02:41:35 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Hriday ji.. bahoot Khoobsoorat Udaan se bhari hai Aapki yea rachna.. Bahoot Bahhoot Khoob

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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2012, 02:53:38 PM »
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waah waah hriday ji bahut achhee nazm pesh kee hai badhaai ho
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2012, 03:15:55 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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waaaaaaaaaahhhhh waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh

kya baat hai hriday ji.,.,....  Usual Smile Usual Smile

bahut bahut bahut khoooobbbb... Usual Smile

dil khush kar diya aapne....

great.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2012, 03:41:13 PM »
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 *** bahut kashish hai apki shayari me***
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2012, 04:53:13 PM »
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bahut khoob Hriday ji

bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.

chhupke zamaane se hum milte the tujhse,
tera chhupke milne aana yaad aata hai,
mujhe dekh ke tera rang nikhar jaata tha,
mujhe dekh tera muskuraana yaad aata hai,  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2012, 06:52:57 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2012, 07:01:31 PM »
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waaahh
Hriday naam hai aapka aur dil ki likhte hain aap--
bahtt khoob ji
daad kubul karen

muskurate rahen
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2012, 12:05:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nysha ji.... aapne bahut hi pyaara comment kiya hai.. dil khush ho gaya ... yunhi aap logon ke comments aate rahe to likhne me mann laga rahega ... bahut bahut shukriya hai ji....dil se...!!!

Quote from: Nysha on March 19, 2012, 02:41:35 PM
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Hriday ji.. bahoot Khoobsoorat Udaan se bhari hai Aapki yea rachna.. Bahoot Bahhoot Khoob

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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2012, 06:37:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on March 19, 2012, 02:53:38 PM
waah waah hriday ji bahut achhee nazm pesh kee hai badhaai ho
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2012, 12:45:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Touhid ji jo aapne meri is rachna ko padha , pasand kiya aur itne dil se comment kiya... main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon....!!! Thank you sooooo much...!!!

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 19, 2012, 03:15:55 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

waaaaaaaaaahhhhh waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh

kya baat hai hriday ji.,.,....  Usual Smile Usual Smile

bahut bahut bahut khoooobbbb... Usual Smile

dil khush kar diya aapne....

great.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2012, 03:17:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tanowar ji...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2012, 12:22:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya MKV ji... main aapka dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: mkv on March 19, 2012, 04:53:13 PM
bahut khoob Hriday ji

bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.

chhupke zamaane se hum milte the tujhse,
tera chhupke milne aana yaad aata hai,
mujhe dekh ke tera rang nikhar jaata tha,
mujhe dekh tera muskuraana yaad aata hai,  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2012, 12:40:23 PM »
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nice one
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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2012, 08:44:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji... aapka main tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon....!!!

Quote from: Shihab on March 19, 2012, 06:22:22 PM
Bahut Khub Hriday Ji... Applause

Aapki Is Peshkash Ne Dil Ko Andar Tak Bheego Diya

Shad o Aaabad Rahiye...

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