Jhelthi hu chal

by suman59 on July 11, 2012, 04:08:34 AM
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jhelti hu chal magar yeh chal nahi aaya
mai bi ik shatir bhanu woh pal nahi aaya

kal hamare din firenge bas yehi socha
sochthi hi reh gayee, woh kal nahi aaya

pyas jisko bi lagi woh jal talak pahuncha
sach yehi hai pyase lab tak jal nahi aaya

khoob garjhe the magar ve fir nahi bharse
laut kar basti main ek baadal nahi aaya

maa tumhere bin abhi tak mai jhulasti hu
chav dene fir koyi aanchal nahi aaya

roz wade aur naare? yeh siyasat hai
nith samasyaein badi, per hal nahi aaya

jhoot ka yahan sammaan hai kitna
satya ki khatir koyi pagal nah aaya
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2012, 04:14:11 AM »
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ziyaadaa kuchh naheen kahnaa bas I salute your kalaam aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2012, 04:21:27 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 11, 2012, 04:14:11 AM
ziyaadaa kuchh naheen kahnaa bas I salute your kalaam aur ek rau

tks dr jee  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2012, 05:20:53 AM »
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yahan buhat kam loug likhtay huvay beher ka khayal rakhtay hen...

achha laga parh kar... buhat khoob
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2012, 05:27:01 AM »
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Bahut hi umda Suman ji bahut hi nayab peskash hai ..... Dheron daad kabool kariye .....
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2012, 03:33:14 AM »
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Bahut Umda
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2012, 03:34:14 AM »
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WAAH SUMAN JI KYA KHUB KAHA
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«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2012, 01:39:58 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 11, 2012, 04:14:11 AM
ziyaadaa kuchh naheen kahnaa bas I salute your kalaam aur ek rau

oohh aaj hi humne yeh dekha. maine pehle bi kaha na GURU ke pass se tarif lena... i am really honoured. thanks dr jee
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Quote from: vb on July 11, 2012, 05:20:53 AM
yahan buhat kam loug likhtay huvay beher ka khayal rakhtay hen...

achha laga parh kar... buhat khoob
tks vb jee
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2012, 01:43:01 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on July 11, 2012, 05:27:01 AM
Bahut hi umda Suman ji bahut hi nayab peskash hai ..... Dheron daad kabool kariye .....

shukriya pankaj jee
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2012, 01:43:26 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 12, 2012, 03:33:14 AM
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tks jee
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Quote from: saahill on July 12, 2012, 03:34:14 AM
WAAH SUMAN JI KYA KHUB KAHA

thanks saahill jee
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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2012, 08:54:58 PM »
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BAUHT ACHI SHAYARI SUMAN SAHEBA.....ASGHAR
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