JIDHAR JIDHAR CHALE...... "MohanN"

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JIDHAR JIDHAR CHALYE

Hum  ek  taqdeer ke  maare   jidhar jidhar chale chalye,
Humaare  arman  bhi  unhin  ke  sahaare   chale chalye!

Sahib,  unh  ke bagair  zeest  mein  lutf  hee  kyaa  thaa,
Din  hee  guzaarne  theh  jun.tun  guzaare  chale chalye!

Zahid  bhi to  jaa  naa  sakaa  jahan  baawjood-e-zahad,
Hum wahan  bhi  tere  karam ke  sahaare  chale chalye!

Jo  hanste  theh  kabhi  humen  bhi  musroor  dekh kar,
Naa jaane kahan,  woh sab chaand sitaare chale chalye!

Saahil ke  rukh to laa naa sake  apnee  kashtee ko hum,
 Ulte humaaree nazar se  dur sab kinaare  chale chalye!

Manzil kee, kahan kahan  naa humen justju rahee thee,
Manzil ko hum kahan kahan naa pukaare  chale chalye!

MohanN ko phir kis liye  koi manzil kee  taalaash rahee,
Apnee aakhree manzil kee taraf  bechaare chale chalye!

Surindar. N                              "MohanN"
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2015, 01:38:34 PM »
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JIDHAR JIDHAR CHALYE

Hum  ek  taqdeer ke  maare   jidhar jidhar chale chalye,
Humaare  arman  bhi  unhin  ke  sahaare   chale chalye!

Sahib,  unh  ke bagair  zeest  mein  lutf  hee  kyaa  thaa,
Din  hee  guzaarne  theh  jun.tun  guzaare  chale chalye!

Zahid  bhi to  jaa  naa  sakaa  jahan  baawjood-e-zahad,
Hum wahan  bhi  tere  karam ke  sahaare  chale chalye!

Jo  hanste  theh  kabhi  humen  bhi  musroor  dekh kar,
Naa jaane kahan,  woh sab chaand sitaare chale chalye!

Saahil ke  rukh to laa naa sake  apnee  kashtee ko hum,
 Ulte humaaree nazar se  dur sab kinaare  chale chalye!

Manzil kee, kahan kahan  naa humen justju rahee thee,
Manzil ko hum kahan kahan naa pukaare  chale chalye!

MohanN ko phir kis liye  koi manzil kee  taalaash rahee,
Apnee aakhree manzil kee taraf  bechaare chale chalye!

Surindar. N                              "MohanN"
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2015, 01:59:24 AM »
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bahut shukria Kondal Sahib, I have never seen so much of daad. Thank you.
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2015, 06:39:06 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on May 06, 2015, 09:09:35 AM
JIDHAR JIDHAR CHALYE

Hum  ek  taqdeer ke  maare   jidhar jidhar chale chalye,
Humaare  arman  bhi  unhin  ke  sahaare   chale chalye!

Sahib,  unh  ke bagair  zeest  mein  lutf  hee  kyaa  thaa,
Din  hee  guzaarne  theh  jun.tun  guzaare  chale chalye!

Zahid  bhi to  jaa  naa  sakaa  jahan  baawjood-e-zahad,
Hum wahan  bhi  tere  karam ke  sahaare  chale chalye!

Jo  hanste  theh  kabhi  humen  bhi  musroor  dekh kar,
Naa jaane kahan,  woh sab chaand sitaare chale chalye!

Saahil ke  rukh to laa naa sake  apnee  kashtee ko hum,
 Ulte humaaree nazar se  dur sab kinaare  chale chalye!

Manzil kee, kahan kahan  naa humen justju rahee thee,
Manzil ko hum kahan kahan naa pukaare  chale chalye!

MohanN ko phir kis liye  koi manzil kee  taalaash rahee,
Apnee aakhree manzil kee taraf  bechaare chale chalye!

Surindar. N                              "MohanN"




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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2015, 01:13:27 PM »
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mohan ji
 sat sri akal
i was in the lounge of mumbai airport when i read this master piece. I almost missed my flight because i just could not get over the vivid imagery that you have conjured in this gem.
Honestly i feel privileged almost blessed for having the honour to read it.
hamare mein ustaadon ko waah waah se nahi navazte. All i can say is thank you for penning your thoughts. This rau stuff cannot measure up to your brilliance. But unfortunately i don't have any other option.so 1 Rau as well.
RABB RAkKHA
 
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 07, 2015, 04:22:20 AM
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bahut shukria Hriday Sahib.
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Quote from: surindarn on May 06, 2015, 09:09:35 AM
JIDHAR JIDHAR CHALYE

Hum  ek  taqdeer ke  maare   jidhar jidhar chale chalye,
Humaare  arman  bhi  unhin  ke  sahaare   chale chalye!

binaa koshish ke pahle hi haar maan liyaa ye to koi bahaaduri naa hui ji....mardo.n wali baat karo Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

Sahib,  unh  ke bagair  zeest  mein  lutf  hee  kyaa  thaa,
Din  hee  guzaarne  theh  jun.tun  guzaare  chale chalye!

aisi bhi dillagi kis kaam ki jo jeene naa de marne naa de.... this is called lethal possessiveness very dangerous  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Zahid  bhi to  jaa  naa  sakaa  jahan  baawjood-e-zahad,
Hum wahan  bhi  tere  karam ke  sahaare  chale chalye!

haan ji ye baat sahi hai ALLAH hi raham karne walaa hai warna apna aamaal aisa to nahin ki jannat mile icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Jo  hanste  theh  kabhi  humen  bhi  musroor  dekh kar,
Naa jaane kahan,  woh sab chaand sitaare chale chalye!

sabhi mere peeche ho liye ji Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

Saahil ke  rukh to laa naa sake  apnee  kashtee ko hum,
 Ulte humaaree nazar se  dur sab kinaare  chale chalye!

hum to doobe ge sanam tujh ko bhi le doobe ge  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

Manzil kee, kahan kahan  naa humen justju rahee thee,
Manzil ko hum kahan kahan naa pukaare  chale chalye!

ek e-mail,whatapp, fb yaa twit kar dete main chali aati ab poooooooooooooooookaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarne ka zamanaa nahin raha ji decency maintain karo ji Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

MohanN ko phir kis liye  koi manzil kee  taalaash rahee,
Apnee aakhree manzil kee taraf  bechaare chale chalye!

sab kuch chhorr ke jaanaa hi jaanaa hai  icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent!

Surindar. N                              "MohanN"



waah waah waah rau insha allah baad mein icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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