JINDAGI..........premdeep

by premdeep on June 20, 2013, 05:49:35 PM
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Gumnaam si hai jindagi
Badnaam si hai jindagi

kya pata kal ho na ho
Mehmaan si hai jindagi

Tum nahi rahon me to
Sunsan si hai jindagi

Ab dard bhi hota nahi
Bejaan si hai jindagi

Har pal mujhe tabah kar
Hairaan si hai jindagi

Dunya ki bheed me kahin
Anjaan si hai  jindagi

Sapne naye dikha ke phir
Beimaan si hai jindagi

Maut se chipti phire
Naadan si hai jindagi

Insaniyat ki shakl mein
Shaitaan si hai jindagi
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2013, 05:57:08 PM »
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Maut se chipti phire
Naadan si hai jindagi

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waah waah premdeep sahab bahut khoob..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2013, 05:59:40 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on June 20, 2013, 05:49:35 PM
Gumnaam si hai jindagi
Badnaam si hai jindagi

kya pata kal ho na ho
Mehmaan si hai jindagi

Tum nahi rahon me to
Sunsan si hai jindagi

Ab dard bhi hota nahi
Bejaan si hai jindagi

Har pal mujhe tabah kar
Hairaan si hai jindagi

Dunya ki bheed me kahin
Anjaan si hai  jindagi

Sapne naye dikha ke phir
Beimaan si hai jindagi

Maut se chipti phire
Naadan si hai jindagi

Insaniyat ki shakl mein
Shaitaan si hai jindagi


good,sir but its ZINDAGI and not JINDAGI
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2013, 06:05:29 PM »
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bahoot achhi lkhi hai....

but main kuchh kahna chahungi....

yeh sahi hai maut se chhipti phire,nadaan si hai zindai......

par life me sirf dhokhebaaz log nahi hote isliye aakhiri line,,,,ke liyeh yeh khna chahti hun zindagi shaitan nahi hai...kuchh logo ki vajah se aap apni zindagi se nafrat nahi kar sakte.......aap apni zindagi unhe banaiye jo aapse pyar karte hai.jinse aap pyaar karte hai phir dekhna  ,,,,,,,,,,insaaniyat ki shakl mein,,,khoobsurat adaa hai zindagi..!!!

sorry agar mera opinion bura laga ho toh...
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2013, 06:20:24 PM »
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Thanks apki opinion sahi hai par hum wahi kahte hain jo hum dekhte hain ajkal saccha pyaar kahin nahi milta har koi is jamane me tanha hai kahin na kahin
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2013, 06:27:21 PM »
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aapko kya lagta hai....jo aap feel karte hain voh maine nahi kiya...of course maine bhi kiya.....but main manage kar leti hun.......qki life me bahot se log aur bhi hai.........main sirf ek insaan ko apni life nahi maan sakti......aur uss insaan ko toh bilkul nahi jo meri kadr nahi karta....

haan yeh baat bhi hai ki pyaar yahi hota hai....par mera manana hai ki main khud ko itna kaabil banaun ki log mere liye tarse na ki main unke liye......and i m sure.....aaj jin logo ko main chahti hun voh kabhi na kabhi yeh jaroor sochenge.........kaisi bhi thi ,,,mast thi yaar,,,,,kassh vapus mil jaye
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2013, 07:53:50 PM »
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bahut khoob ... dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2013, 07:56:22 PM »
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Behad khoobsurat.
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2013, 09:39:11 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2013, 11:38:30 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2013, 12:24:43 AM »
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Quote from: premdeep on June 20, 2013, 05:49:35 PM
Gumnaam si hai jindagi
Badnaam si hai jindagi

kya pata kal ho na ho
Mehmaan si hai jindagi

Tum nahi rahon me to
Sunsan si hai jindagi

Ab dard bhi hota nahi
Bejaan si hai jindagi

Har pal mujhe tabah kar
Hairaan si hai jindagi

Dunya ki bheed me kahin
Anjaan si hai  jindagi

Sapne naye dikha ke phir
Beimaan si hai jindagi

Maut se chipti phire
Naadan si hai jindagi

Insaniyat ki shakl mein
Shaitaan si hai jindagi


bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2013, 12:27:19 AM »
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Achchhee ghazal kahi Premdeep ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2013, 02:56:23 AM »
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Quote from: premdeep on June 20, 2013, 05:49:35 PM
Gumnaam si hai jindagi
Badnaam si hai jindagi
ye to zindagi bitaane waale pe nirbhar hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
kya pata kal ho na ho
Mehmaan si hai jindagi
ye to sachchai hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Tum nahi rahon me to
Sunsan si hai jindagi
apni apni samjh hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Ab dard bhi hota nahi
Bejaan si hai jindagi
apne ehsaas ki baat hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Har pal mujhe tabah kar
Hairaan si hai jindagi
aisa ho hi nahin sakta. insaan harr.n hota hai zindagi nahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Dunya ki bheed me kahin
Anjaan si hai  jindagi
rishte anjaan ho jaate hain aur kuch nahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Sapne naye dikha ke phir
Beimaan si hai jindagi
yehi haqeeqat hai dear icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Maut se chipti phire
Naadan si hai jindagi
fact!!! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Insaniyat ki shakl mein
Shaitaan si hai jindagi
insaan farishta aur shaitaan hota hai zindagi nahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


wah wah wah...!
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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2013, 03:40:14 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2013, 05:19:07 AM »
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waah! kiya kahne!
nice poem!
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