jisne dil ka suna

by 19deepak94 on March 01, 2011, 10:24:40 AM
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jajbaaton me na baha karo

faisle dil se liya karo

jajbaat ke sahare kaun tik paya hai

jisne dil ka suna vo hi safal ho paya hai
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 11:23:49 AM »
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acchi koshish he deepak ji.........

is se aur behtar likhne ki koshish kjiye......aacha laga apka likhi chand lines padkar......keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 02:37:34 PM »
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zazbaato me hi baha karo
khud ka lutiya duboya karo

kaun bana hai insaan yahan
goli maaro bheje me aur bas tadapte dil ka hi suna karo
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mast likha hai boss
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2011, 04:19:18 PM »
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Bahut Khub Deepak JI
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2011, 04:21:55 PM »
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Nice deepak ji...
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