Jisse doodh piya,Usi chati ko Sharminda kiya.!! @Advo.RavinderRavi"Sagar"

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 09, 2013, 09:05:25 PM
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Jis se doodh piya,
Usi chati ko MardoN ne Sharminda kiya.!
Bhare bazaar mein Ourat ki,
Asmt ko chourahe par bech diya.!!

Bante hain bade Mard,
Dikhaate ek Nirhee Abla par Mardangi.!
Chnd LamhoN ki Khushi khatir,
Ourat ko Jinda Laash bana diya.!!

Kaisi hasrat se dekhti,
Wo Zamane ki Khuli Hawa ko.!
Saiyad ne Panchi Samajh,
Tote-Maina ki Tarha Pinchade mein Kaid kiya.!!

Aankhein hote Patti Bandhi,
Gandhari ne Apni Aankhon ka Tyaag kiya.!
Wo bhi Ourat thi jisne,
Agnee-Pariksh de Pati ka Naam kiya.!!

Ourat Abala se Sabala,
Tabhiu ho sakte hai beshak "Ravinder".!
Paida hote hi Hamne,
Apne LadkoN ki Souch ko Saaf kiya.!!


जिस से दूध पिया,
उसी छाती को मर्दों ने शर्मिंदा किया.!
भरे बाज़ार में औरत की,
अस्म्त को चौराहे पर बेच दिया.!!

बनते हैं बड़े मर्द,
दिखाते एक निरही अबला पर मर्दानगी.!
चन्द लम्हों की खुशी खातिर,
औरत को जिंदा लाश बना दिया.!!

कैसी हसरत से देखती,
वो ज़माने की खुली हवा को.!
सैयाद ने पंछी समझ,
तोते-मैना की तरहा पिंचड़े में क़ैद किया.!!

आँखें होते पट्टी बाँधी,
गंधारी ने अपनी आँखों का त्याग किया.!
वो भी औरत थी जिसने,
अग्नि-परीक्ष दे पति का नाम किया.!!

औरत अबला से सबला,
तभी हो  सकती  है बेशक "रविंदर".!
पैदा होते ही हमने,
अपने लड़कों की सौच को सॉफ किया.!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2013, 10:57:35 PM »
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bahut samvedansheel
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2013, 11:22:51 PM »
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behad gehre ehsas hain aapke... aapke is jazbe ko mera salaam.
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2013, 01:18:04 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 09, 2013, 10:57:35 PM
bahut samvedansheel
Thanks Sir.!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 10, 2013, 01:18:56 AM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 11:22:51 PM
behad gehre ehsas hain aapke... aapke is jazbe ko mera salaam.
Shuqriya.!!Ma"am.
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«Reply #5 on: October 10, 2013, 01:55:41 AM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

Ravi jee bade hi gehre ehsaaso.N ka bayaan apne sahi andaaz me sahi mudde ko utha ke kiya..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: October 10, 2013, 02:15:49 AM »
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notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

Ravi jee bade hi gehre ehsaaso.N ka bayaan apne sahi andaaz me sahi mudde ko utha ke kiya..dhero daad..happy9

Hausla afzaai k liye shuqriya.!!

Ashwani Jee.!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2013, 02:22:50 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 10, 2013, 02:15:49 AM
Hausla afzaai k liye shuqriya.!!

Ashwani Jee.!!

You'r welcome..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: October 10, 2013, 02:58:38 PM »
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Bahut hi achchi soch aur gehre ehsaas ravi ji... dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaad..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 10, 2013, 03:05:10 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on October 10, 2013, 02:58:38 PM
Bahut hi achchi soch aur gehre ehsaas ravi ji... dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaad..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shuqriya.!!Aqsh Jee.
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