Jiye jati hu...

by brokenbyluv on October 17, 2009, 09:03:19 PM
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Kaam nhi hai merra paas phir bhi logo ki muskurahat kamati hu,

koi nhi hai merra humsafar phir bhi kisi se pyar kiye jati hu,

duniya ki har sachai se rubaru hone k liye har khel mein khud ko azmati hu,

ankho mein ansuo ko chhupake hotho se GEET gaati hu,

bus yaro yahi zindgi hai merri jise zindadili se jiye jati hu...... happy9
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2009, 10:08:23 PM »
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Nice and excellent Geet Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2009, 07:07:06 PM »
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thnx rishi ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2009, 10:11:22 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Geet ji,very touching and lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause love4
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2009, 10:50:45 AM »
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thnx madhuji...
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2009, 08:32:44 AM »
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Bahut Acche Geet Ji.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2009, 12:39:57 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Geet !
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2009, 01:05:58 PM »
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Geet-di man ko lubhane wala madhur geet hai aapka... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lagti hai ye meri he kahani,par mai lab siye jaati hu
Kuchh nahi kehti duniya walo se bas yuhi jiye jaati hu
Likh-likh k daastaan apni mai panne syahi se bhare jaati hu
Khud padhati,khud he sunti hu,aur ashkon se daaman bhigoye jaati hu... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed





Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 17, 2009, 09:03:19 PM
Kaam nhi hai merra paas phir bhi logo ki muskurahat kamati hu,

koi nhi hai merra humsafar phir bhi kisi se pyar kiye jati hu,

duniya ki har sachai se rubaru hone k liye har khel mein khud ko azmati hu,

ankho mein ansuo ko chhupake hotho se GEET gaati hu,

bus yaro yahi zindgi hai merri jise zindadili se jiye jati hu...... happy9
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2009, 02:57:50 PM »
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thnx alot mann ji n sophiji...
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2009, 02:58:46 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 24, 2009, 01:05:58 PM
Geet-di man ko lubhane wala madhur geet hai aapka... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lagti hai ye meri he kahani,par mai lab siye jaati hu
Kuchh nahi kehti duniya walo se bas yuhi jiye jaati hu
Likh-likh k daastaan apni mai panne syahi se bhare jaati hu
Khud padhati,khud he sunti hu,aur ashkon se daaman bhigoye jaati hu... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed






dear koyal thnx alot aur tumne bahut bahut bahut hi acha likha hai..thnx alot for sharing....
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2009, 06:09:38 PM »
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Thanks a lot Geet-di for such encourageing words...

Kya kahu,kis-se kahu, aur main kaise kahu
Kyon main toot-toot kar bhi jiye jati hu...

Koi nahi hai yahaan eysa jise apna keh saku main
Fir bhi njaane kis braham mai jiye jaati hu main

Dil chupke-chupke rota hai,Aankho se ashko ka samunder behta hai
Jigar mai liye dard ka lawa,tum he kaho kyon jiye jaati hu main... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed


Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 24, 2009, 02:58:46 PM
dear koyal thnx alot aur tumne bahut bahut bahut hi acha likha hai..thnx alot for sharing....
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2009, 06:19:26 PM »
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waah koyal...gr8 going....

terra dard mujhe kaafi gehra lagta hai,
kuch apno ki bewafai se thehra lagta hai,
per merre dost main bhi zeher k ghuth piye jati hu..
jaise bhi hai apni hai ye zingi..ise pyar se jiye jati hu......
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«Reply #12 on: November 03, 2009, 06:50:49 PM »
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Mere dard ko samajhne aur saath dene k liye aapka tahedil se shukriya Geet-di...

Sach bahut vyavharik hai tera soch pyari-di
Zindgi apni hai so ise pyaar se jiye jaati hu
Hasne ka waada kiya tha kabhi kisise maine
So ab muskurate huye jiye jaati hu main......

Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 03, 2009, 06:19:26 PM


waah koyal...gr8 going....

terra dard mujhe kaafi gehra lagta hai,
kuch apno ki bewafai se thehra lagta hai,
per merre dost main bhi zeher k ghuth piye jati hu..
jaise bhi hai apni hai ye zingi..ise pyar se jiye jati hu......
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«Reply #13 on: November 03, 2009, 07:17:00 PM »
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ur welcome..koyal...

terre dard ka ilaaj tou nhi hai merre paas..
per phir bhi ek baat kehti hu,
tu darna mat kabhi gamo se...
main bhi khushi se har dard ko seheti hu......
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