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JOSH-E-QADAM BADHTA GAYA
RAASTA GHAT-TA GAYA
GAFLATON KE BAADALON KA
DHUNDH BHI CHANT-TA GAYA
ROD.A PAHAR SA MERI
RAAH SE HAT-TA GAYA
MAI ADHOORA CHAND SA
KOI BHI PADHTA GAYA
CHAR DAANE KAAG BHI
IS DAR SE CHUGTA GAYA
IK MUKAMMAL SHAIRI
MAI NEEND ME LIKHTA GAYA
YE GAZAL MAI UNKAHI
TUM SE HI KAHTA GAYA
MATLA WOH DEEVAN SE
BAS EK HI CHUNTA GAYA
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2010, 06:51:13 PM » |
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wah wah mamta ji.. wah... superb  jasbir singh hira_company@yahoo.com |
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2010, 08:02:20 PM » |
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shukriya Jasbirsing ji!
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 05:51:48 AM » |
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bahoot hi khoob likhti hain mamta ji aap...shabd to mano aapki kalam se nikal kar moti ho jaate hain...is behtreen rachna ke liye dheron dad
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2010, 06:30:40 AM » |
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Nice creation Mamta ji. Keep it up.
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2010, 08:03:29 AM » |
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SANJEEV !BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAAD !! AAP JAISE SARAHANE WALE BHI KISI KUSHAL JOHARI SE KAM NAHI JO SADHARAN SE PATTHAR ME BHI HEERE KI SIFAT (PRABHAV,GUN) PAIDA KAR DETE HAIN.PRASANSHA KE PUSPGUCH JO AAP NE HUME BHENT KIYE UNKE LIYE PUNAH KOTISHAH DHANYAWAAD.
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2010, 08:05:56 AM » |
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RIYAZ JI!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2010, 12:18:11 PM » |
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kya baat hai mamta ji bahut khoob
KEEP IT UP
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2010, 12:19:00 PM » |
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RASTA DARTA THA MERE KADAM SE
WO JANTA THA
MAIN DOOR TAK CHALTA HOON
MANZILEN AA JATI THI KAREEB MERE
KYONKI WO JANTI THI
MAIN MANZIL PER THAHARTA HOON
WO AKSAR SATATE HAI MUJHKO MERE HI KHAYALO MAIN
KYONKI WO JANTE HAI
MAIN UNSE ISQ KARTA HOON
WO DOOR HOKAR LETE HAIN MAZA MERI BE-CHAINI KA
KYONKI WO JANTE HAI
UNKE BINA HAMESHA MAIN TADAPTA HOON
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2010, 12:30:25 PM » |
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RASTA DARTA THA MERE KADAM SE
WO JANTA THA
MAIN DOOR TAK CHALTA HOON
MANZILEN AA JATI THI KAREEB MERE
KYONKI WO JANTI THI
MAIN MANZIL PER THAHARTA HOON
WO AKSAR SATATE HAI MUJHKO MERE HI KHAYALO MAIN
KYONKI WO JANTE HAI
MAIN UNSE ISQ KARTA HOON
WO DOOR HOKAR LETE HAIN MAZA MERI BE-CHAINI KA
KYONKI WO JANTE HAI
UNKE BINA HAMESHA MAIN TADAPTA HOON
wahhhhhh wahhhhhh shuruaati do sheron ki positiveness kamal hai bhai....bahoot khoob |
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2010, 04:20:32 PM » |
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WAAH KYA BAAT HAI MOHSIN JI !!!AAP BHI BAKAMAAL LIKHTE HAIN.
ISI SILSILE ME KUCH OR.....
SUBUKRAFTARI MERE QADAMO KI DEKH
MAI MANZIL SE BHI AAGE NIKAL GAYA
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2010, 04:38:15 PM » |
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2010, 01:00:46 AM » |
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thanks koyal!!!
manzil ke jo shaidai hain
raaston se unki aashnai hai
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2010, 02:19:21 AM » |
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JOSH-E-QADAM BADHTA GAYA
RAASTA GHAT-TA GAYA
GAFLATON KE BAADALON KA
DHUNDH BHI CHANT-TA GAYA
ROD.A PAHAR SA MERI
RAAH SE HAT-TA GAYA
MAI ADHOORA CHAND SA
KOI BHI PADHTA GAYA
CHAR DAANE KAAG BHI
IS DAR SE CHUGTA GAYA
IK MUKAMMAL SHAIRI
MAI NEEND ME LIKHTA GAYA
YE GAZAL MAI UNKAHI
TUM SE HI KAHTA GAYA
MATLA WOH DEEVAN SE
BAS EK HI CHUNTA GAYA
Wah! Mamta Ji Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki |
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2010, 07:56:02 AM » |
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THSNKS RAJESH JI!!!
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