JUDAAI....Premdeep

by premdeep on August 03, 2014, 10:20:57 AM
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wo basti wo shahar kahan gaya   mere log mera ghar kahan gaya
zindagi ki dhoop mein ajnabi ye raaste
raah mein padta wo sajar kahan gaya
doobta tha roz jisme saanjh ka suraj kabhi
saahil hai dhondta wo samandar kahan gaya
zindagi ke safar mein yun to mile kayi log hain
jo mila tha mufalisi mein wo humsafar kahan gaya
nafarat bikati hai yahan zehar ka bazaar hai
beasar kar de har zehar ko wo asar kahan gaya
dekh zamane ki halat har shay bik gayi yahan
jo na jhuka tha kisi dar pe wo sar kahan gaya
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2014, 01:01:27 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2014, 02:50:41 PM »
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Beautiful. .
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2014, 03:47:22 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on August 03, 2014, 10:20:57 AM
wo basti wo shahar kahan gaya   mere log mera ghar kahan gaya
zindagi ki dhoop mein ajnabi ye raaste
raah mein padta wo sajar kahan gaya
doobta tha roz jisme saanjh ka suraj kabhi
saahil hai dhondta wo samandar kahan gaya
zindagi ke safar mein yun to mile kayi log hain
jo mila tha mufalisi mein wo humsafar kahan gaya
nafarat bikati hai yahan zehar ka bazaar hai
beasar kar de har zehar ko wo asar kahan gaya
dekh zamane ki halat har shay bik gayi yahan
jo na jhuka tha kisi dar pe wo sar kahan gaya


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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wo basti wo shahar kahan gaya 
mere log mera ghar kahan gaya
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
zindagi ki dhoop mein ajnabi ye raaste
raah mein padta wo sajar kahan gaya
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


doobta tha roz jisme saanjh ka suraj kabhi
saahil hai dhondta wo samandar kahan gaya
Applause Applause Applause Applause

zindagi ke safar mein yun to mile kayi log hain
jo mila tha mufalisi mein wo humsafar kahan gaya
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

nafarat bikati hai yahan zehar ka bazaar hai
beasar kar de har zehar ko wo asar kahan gaya

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

dekh zamane ki halat har shay bik gayi yahan
jo na jhuka tha kisi dar pe wo sar kahan gaya
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
ek rau ke saath dheron 2 daaaaaaaaaaaaad premdeep ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2014, 06:22:08 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub premji.....
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