*Jungal Kaisa Hoga?*

by Roja on February 04, 2008, 10:48:11 PM
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Aaj hamara aisa hai, to kal kaisa hoga
Maiyli hoti rahi to Ganga Jal kaisa hoga?

Khoon ka pyasa aaj aadmi, yahan aadmi ke
Mai yeh soch rahi hu ki jungal kaisa hoga?

Saari suvidayein milne per kheth rahe banjar
Barson se jo pyasa hai marustal kaisa hoga?

Takkar maar bhag jate hai Vahan sadkon per
Koyi nahi dekhta ki ghayal kaisa hoga?

Mandir masjid ek saat hai yeh to accha hai
Inko koyi juda kare haal kaisa hoga?

Shehron ki sadkon per aksar mujhe yaad aaya
Laga gaov main aangan ka pipal kaisa kaisa hoga?

Saat tumhara pakar hi mai sab kuch kar paya hai
Bina tumhare jeevan ka her pal kaisa hoga?


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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2008, 10:52:31 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Roja!!!
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zakhmola
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2008, 07:41:17 AM »
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eint pattharon ka jungle hone laga hai shahar
jaanwaron sey zyada wahsiyana hone laga hai shahar
darte they murda laashon sey kisi jamane mein log
aajkal zinda logon sey darane laga hai Shahar.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2008, 12:02:49 PM »
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Bohat acha likha hai Roja dear.. Usual Smile
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mehhekkk
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2008, 03:56:52 PM »
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bahut badhiya roja

ye aaj ki duniya kab rukh badale koi bharosa nahi
aaj hawa ka jhoka kab toofan bane koi bharosa nahi
kal ki chinta koi nahi karta,hariyali nasht karte sare
sach mein jab sukhi hogi dharti,jeevan kaisa hoga?
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2008, 09:51:51 PM »
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Very nice Roja, Zakhmola and Mehek !
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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2008, 10:37:55 AM »
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Really beautiful work Roja..

Nice Replies Zakhmola and Mehek..
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2008, 12:29:39 PM »
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Thanks Pooja di, Zakhmola ji, Honey, mehekkji, talat sis and shikha di,
Thank you very much for your valuable comments
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