jurrat-e-qalam:Miscellaneous Shayri

Tasleem ahmad Tasleem

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aalam-e-takhyyul par kiska kya ijara he
soch he muhabbat ki aur qalam hamara he

na khuda sazish he aur na kaam gulchin ka
titliyon ko phoolon ki dillagi ne mara he

nakhuda ki sazish ne hi dubo diya warna
muntazir hamara to aaj bhi kinara he

unke shokh aanchal mein anginat bahrien hein
aansuon se tar daaman hijr mein hamara he

unse door rehna to maslehet he e tasleem
warna zindagi aisi kab hamein gawara he


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thinkhattk

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Re: jurrat-e-qalam

«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2010, 08:12:05 AM »


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riyaz106

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Re: jurrat-e-qalam

«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2010, 11:00:30 AM »

Tasleem sahab is ghazal ke baare mein kya kahun, bezuban saa ho gaya hun. Aisi purkashish, umdah, murassa aur taghazzul se pur ghazlein bahut kam padhne ko milti hain. Aala meyar ki aala ghazal hai ye. Ahsaasat ko bahut asardaar lahje mein piroya hai. Marhaba.

Quote from: Tasleem ahmad Tasleem on March 30, 2010, 07:39:11 AM


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nazar ghouri

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Re: jurrat-e-qalam

«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2010, 10:42:33 PM »

nakhuda ki sazish ne hi dubo diya warna
muntazir hamara to aaj bhi kinara he

unse door rehna to maslehet he e tasleem
warna zindagi aisi kab hamein gawara he
[/quote]riyaaz saheb ne itna likh diya ke hum lafzaao'n ke liye taras rahe hain..you r truely deserve for such a compliments ..jst i can say its an ultimate ghazal.yeh do shair to hifazat ke laaeq hain ,mere khayal se.


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Re: jurrat-e-qalam

«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 02:07:43 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Tasleemji


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Tasleem ahmad Tasleem

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Re: jurrat-e-qalam

«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 02:09:32 PM »

:hello2:Riyaz Sahab Aur nazar Sahab aap hazraat ne jo is talib-e-ilm ki housla afzai ki he uska badal mere paas nahi he! bas ek duaiya matla hazir har raha hun
ya rab mere qalam ko tu aisa kamal de
Jiski zamana hashr ke din tak misaal de
ummid karta hun ke aap ko behad pasand aayega


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madhuwesh

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Re: jurrat-e-qalam

«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2010, 07:50:58 PM »

Wah wah Tasleem ji,bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.mindblowing creation.
lovely lines Nazar ji. Hats off to you!


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Tasleem ahmad Tasleem

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Re: jurrat-e-qalam

«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2010, 04:49:25 AM »

shihab ji aur Madhuwesh ji housla afzai ka shukria
aur jo aap ne rabb-e-kareem se jo dua mere haq mein ki he khuda apko ajre azeem ata kre ameen


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