kaamini...........A.B

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                        khoya  hua   chaand, bikhri  chaandni mili...,
                        judaa   saaz  se  hui mujhe  raagni  mili...,

                        rota  hua  chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
                        virah  ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

                        ho   jaaye  fanaa  wajood   bhi uska   aaj...,
                        zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

                        shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
                        bahut  phiki-phiki  si  mujhe chaashni mili...,

                        aansuo.n  mein  simta her dard pukaarta hai...,
                        aurat ko hi bechain uljhi hui vaahini mili ...,
                        

                        
                        
                        
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2013, 11:42:18 PM »
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                        khoya  hua   chaand, bikhri  chandni mili...,
                        judaa   saaz  se  hui mujhe  raagni  mili...,

                        rota  hua  chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
                        virah  ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

                        ho   jaaye  fanaa  wajood   bhi uska   aaj...,
                        zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

                        shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
                        bahut  phiki-phiki  si  mujhe chashni mili...,

                        apne   tasawwar  ka   kirdaar ban ke rah gai...,
                        bechain rishto mein uljhi aksar bandini mili...,
                       

                       
                       
                       

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Adil jee..

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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2013, 11:55:28 PM »
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khoya  hua   chaand, bikhri  chandni mili...,
judaa   saaz  se  hui mujhe  raagni  mili...,

rota  hua  chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
virah  ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

kya kahne Adil bhai ..ye do ashaar to..bahut umda
khaas taur pe matle pe jitni daad dee jaaye kam hai..
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2013, 01:02:52 AM »
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waah munfarid qafia ke sath achi ghazal adil ji ,..........bohat c daad,........
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2013, 01:10:27 AM »
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bahut khoob AB ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2013, 01:22:52 AM »
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Very nice Adil ji...
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2013, 01:50:21 AM »
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Nice1 Adilji.
Quote from: adil bechain on July 26, 2013, 10:39:48 PM


                        khoya  hua   chaand, bikhri  chaandni mili...,
                        judaa   saaz  se  hui mujhe  raagni  mili...,

                        rota  hua  chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
                        virah  ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

                        ho   jaaye  fanaa  wajood   bhi uska   aaj...,
                        zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

                        shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
                        bahut  phiki-phiki  si  mujhe chaashni mili...,

                        aansuo.n  mein  simta her dard pukaarta hai...,
                        aurat ko hi bechain uljhi hui vaahini mili ...,
                       

                       
                       
                       
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«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2013, 02:44:28 AM »
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behad umda peshkash AB jee..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2013, 02:09:46 PM »
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shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
  bahut  phiki-phiki  si  mujhe chaashni mili...,

waah waah A.B lajawaab hai.
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«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2013, 03:31:41 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2013, 03:45:03 PM »
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wah wah wah ab bhai sahbh bahut khub bahut khubsurat gazal...dheron daad o mubarakbaad.......

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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2013, 02:46:23 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on July 26, 2013, 10:39:48 PM


                        khoya  hua   chaand, bikhri  chaandni mili...,
                        judaa   saaz  se  hui mujhe  raagni  mili...,

                        rota  hua  chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
                        virah  ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

                        ho   jaaye  fanaa  wajood   bhi uska   aaj...,
                        zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

                        shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
                        bahut  phiki-phiki  si  mujhe chaashni mili...,

                        aansuo.n  mein  simta her dard pukaarta hai...,
                        aurat ko hi bechain uljhi hui vaahini mili ...,
                       

                       
                       
                       




wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2013, 09:28:47 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on July 26, 2013, 11:42:18 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Adil jee..

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