kaamini...........A.B

by adil bechain on July 26, 2013, 10:39:48 PM

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   khoya hua chaand, bikhri chaandni mili...,
   judaa saaz se hui mujhe raagni mili...,

   rota hua chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
   virah ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

   ho jaaye fanaa wajood bhi uska aaj...,
   zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

   shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
   bahut phiki-phiki si mujhe chaashni mili...,

   aansuo.n mein simta her dard pukaarta hai...,
      aurat ko hi bechain uljhi hui vaahini mili ...,


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Re: kaamini...........A.B

«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2013, 11:42:18 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on July 26, 2013, 10:39:48 PM

khoya hua chaand, bikhri chandni mili...,
judaa saaz se hui mujhe raagni mili...,

rota hua chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
virah ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

ho jaaye fanaa wajood bhi uska aaj...,
zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
bahut phiki-phiki si mujhe chashni mili...,

apne tasawwar ka kirdaar ban ke rah gai...,
bechain rishto mein uljhi aksar bandini mili...,

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Adil jee..

Shandaar peshakash


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Re: kaamini...........A.B

«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2013, 11:55:28 PM »

khoya hua chaand, bikhri chandni mili...,
judaa saaz se hui mujhe raagni mili...,

rota hua chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
virah ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

kya kahne Adil bhai ..ye do ashaar to..bahut umda
khaas taur pe matle pe jitni daad dee jaaye kam hai..


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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2013, 01:02:52 AM »

waah munfarid qafia ke sath achi ghazal adil ji ,..........bohat c daad,........


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Re: kaamini...........A.B

«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2013, 01:10:27 AM »

bahut khoob AB ji


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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2013, 01:22:52 AM »

Very nice Adil ji...


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Re: kaamini...........A.B

«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2013, 01:50:21 AM »

Nice1 Adilji.

Quote from: adil bechain on July 26, 2013, 10:39:48 PM

khoya hua chaand, bikhri chaandni mili...,
judaa saaz se hui mujhe raagni mili...,

rota hua chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
virah ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

ho jaaye fanaa wajood bhi uska aaj...,
zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
bahut phiki-phiki si mujhe chaashni mili...,

aansuo.n mein simta her dard pukaarta hai...,
aurat ko hi bechain uljhi hui vaahini mili ...,


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«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2013, 02:44:28 AM »

behad umda peshkash AB jee..dhero daad.. happy9


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Re: kaamini...........A.B

«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2013, 02:09:46 PM »

shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
bahut phiki-phiki si mujhe chaashni mili...,

waah waah A.B lajawaab hai.


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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2013, 03:45:03 PM »

wah wah wah ab bhai sahbh bahut khub bahut khubsurat gazal...dheron daad o mubarakbaad.......

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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2013, 03:38:42 AM »

gud


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Re: kaamini...........A.B

«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2013, 02:46:23 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on July 26, 2013, 10:39:48 PM

khoya hua chaand, bikhri chaandni mili...,
judaa saaz se hui mujhe raagni mili...,

rota hua chhod, shamaa ko parwana chala...,
virah ki aag mein jalti hui kaamini mili...,

ho jaaye fanaa wajood bhi uska aaj...,
zarra-e-zameen pe tadapti hui daamini mili...,

shayad be-lazzat ho chuka hai zaayeka apna...,
bahut phiki-phiki si mujhe chaashni mili...,

aansuo.n mein simta her dard pukaarta hai...,
aurat ko hi bechain uljhi hui vaahini mili ...,

wah wah