<>*Kaanch k khwaab*<>

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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 05:56:31 AM »
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Wah ji wah... kya kehne aapke... khwaabon se tutne ka darr dikha rahe ho aap ... kavita bahut pyaari hai ek nayaa andaaz ek nayi soch... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

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kitna sambhaaloge sheeshe se bane khwaabon ko,
ek hawaa ke jhaunke se tut ke bikhar jaana hai,

baste nahi aankhon me tute huye khwaab hain jo,
dil me unhe rehna hai aur ghayal kar jaana hai,

aankhon me baste hain khwaab hasi hote hain jab,
poore agar na huye to aankhon ko chhod jaana hai,

zindagi ke safar mein har kadam naya khwaab hai,
tutne ka dar ho to bas theher humein jaana hai,

aankhon me kai khwaab honge, unme kuch poore bhi honge,
khwaab kuch tute bhi hon to, chalte humein jaana hai...
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 06:06:13 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 05:05:49 AM


APNE KHAWABON KO ISS TARAH NA SONE DE
JAGAA UNHAIN AUR ZINDAGI KA LUTF LENE DE


  NICE ...KASAK JI
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 06:08:17 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 31, 2010, 05:56:31 AM
Wah ji wah... kya kehne aapke... khwaabon se tutne ka darr dikha rahe ho aap ... kavita bahut pyaari hai ek nayaa andaaz ek nayi soch... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kitna sambhaaloge sheeshe se bane khwaabon ko,
ek hawaa ke jhaunke se tut ke bikhar jaana hai,

baste nahi aankhon me tute huye khwaab hain jo,
dil me unhe rehna hai aur ghayal kar jaana hai,

aankhon me baste hain khwaab hasi hote hain jab,
poore agar na huye to aankhon ko chhod jaana hai,

zindagi ke safar mein har kadam naya khwaab hai,
tutne ka dar ho to bas theher humein jaana hai,

aankhon me kai khwaab honge, unme kuch poore bhi honge,
khwaab kuch tute bhi hon to, chalte humein jaana hai...

KLASKAR JI YOUR AAPROACH IZ POSITIVE.....GHUM AUR KHUSHI TO INHI KHAWABON SE JUDE HAIN
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 06:20:13 AM »
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Anamika-di.... icon_king icon_queen icon_flower


Tere ye naajuk-naajuk kaanch k khwaab
Jaise gulab ki pakhudi pe oos ki bund

Dil me ankurit ho rahe wo ankhe anokhe sapne
Pyaasi titli ko mil gayi wo shabnum kee bund

Sabhalna poore hone ke pehle toot naa jaayen
Pine k pehle dhulak na jaay wo amrit ki bund





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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 08:13:10 PM »
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Quote from: kameeney on August 31, 2010, 06:06:13 AM
APNE KHAWABON KO ISS TARAH NA SONE DE
JAGAA UNHAIN AUR ZINDAGI KA LUTF LENE DE


  NICE ...KASAK JI



thnx k ji......pasand karne k liye aur sarahne k liye...

lutf lete hue ab thak gaye hain mere kadam
ab tu mujhe sukun ki ek lambi nind sone de
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 09:05:21 PM »
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Kask Jee Aadaab!

Kia khayaal aur kia ahsaas kahe hai aapne..  lafz bhi behad achche chune hai Daad Jee daad ... aapne jin shadoN meiN kalaam kahi hai waqai daad ke kabil hai.... and last sher is mindbowing.. kia shayari kii hai aapne jee daad  

Kuch khaboN per likh rahe the hum woh share kar dete hai.. Usual Smile        


Mujhe rangeen khawaab na dikha Aey meri jane gazal
MaiN khayaloN meiN door kahiN jau.n naa nikal..!!!!!!!!

Aye meri Jaan e Gazal..... Aye meri Jaan e Gazal..... !!!!


    

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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 10:02:48 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 05:05:49 AM


Bahut hi sundar peshkash hai aap ki Anamika Ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2010, 08:26:04 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 31, 2010, 09:05:21 PM
Kask Jee Aadaab!

Kia khayaal aur kia ahsaas kahe hai aapne..  lafz bhi behad achche chune hai Daad Jee daad ... aapne jin shadoN meiN kalaam kahi hai waqai daad ke kabil hai.... and last sher is mindbowing.. kia shayari kii hai aapne jee daad   

Kuch khaboN per likh rahe the hum woh share kar dete hai.. Usual Smile       


Mujhe rangeen khawaab na dikha Aey meri jane gazal
MaiN khayaloN meiN door kahiN jau.n naa nikal..!!!!!!!!

Aye meri Jaan e Gazal..... Aye meri Jaan e Gazal..... !!!!


     



parwazz ji bht bht shukriya k aapne meri is nakaam si koshish ko pasand farmaya aur saraha....
aapne do lines me bht kuch keh diya ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2010, 08:27:21 PM »
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Tere ye naajuk-naajuk kaanch k khwaab
Jaise gulab ki pakhudi pe oos ki bund

Dil me ankurit ho rahe wo ankhe anokhe sapne
Pyaasi titli ko mil gayi wo shabnum kee bund

Sabhalna poore hone ke pehle toot naa jaayen
Pine k pehle dhulak na jaay wo amrit ki bund




 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mast likha hai gudiya tumne
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 31, 2010, 10:02:48 PM
Bahut hi sundar peshkash hai aap ki Anamika Ji

sir ji thnkuuuuu for appreciation
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 05:05:49 AM


achcha nazaria hai..good one kasak ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2010, 01:07:32 PM »
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Thank you Kasak-di...... hello hello wave wave


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 01, 2010, 08:27:21 PM
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