kaanto ko chum phulo ka seena jalaya hai... soudagar

by soudagar on July 02, 2012, 05:12:11 AM
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rishto ki meharbani,inse har dum dhokha khaya hai
apno se ho na-umeed,maine gairo ko gale lagaya hai

chaman ke phul bhi murjha jate the mere chhoone se
aaj kanto ko chumke, maine phulo ka seena jalaya hai

sabki chahat thi mujhe jaldi mile do gaj zameen
zinda reh sabke armano ko maine kabr mein dafnaya hai

khush hoon dushmano ke sath jo sach ka zehar to dete hai
dosto ne to dosti ke jhuthe jaam de hamesa behkaya hai

jo mile the aansu, dard , chahat, sab rog mere meet gaye
jab se maikhane ja mai ko "soudagar"ne apni dawa banaya hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2012, 05:30:53 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2012, 05:35:55 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2012, 07:31:16 AM »
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achhi koshish he saudagar sahab...badhiya ..keep the gud work
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2012, 07:54:01 AM »
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rishto ki meharbani,inse har dum dhokha khaya hai
apno se ho na-umeed,maine gairo ko gale lagaya hai

chaman ke phul bhi murjha jate the mere chhoone se
aaj kanto ko chumke, maine phulo ka seena jalaya hai

sabki chahat thi mujhe jaldi mile do gaj zameen
zinda reh sabke armano ko maine kabr mein dafnaya hai

khush hoon dushmano ke sath jo sach ka zehar to dete hai
dosto ne to dosti ke jhuthe jaam de hamesa behkaya hai

jo mile the aansu, dard , chahat, sab rog mere meet gaye
jab se maikhane ja mai ko "soudagar"ne apni dawa banaya hai



Bahut Bahut Khoooob Saudagar Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Gehre Jazbaat..Khaas Taur Par yeh Sher Bahut Hi Gehra Aur Khoob Raha...

"Khush Hoon Dushmano Ke Saath Jo Sach Ka Zehar To Dete Hai
 DostoN Ne To Dosti Ki,Jhoote Jaam De Humesha Behkaya Hai"

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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2012, 08:40:18 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2012, 09:14:46 AM »
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jo aapne likha hai zindagi ki sachayee hai. BAHUT KHOOB
JAB ZINDAGI KI SACHAYEE JAN LE TO
KISI SE GILAA SHIKWA KAISA
JB HAQEEKAT SE HO GAYA TARUKH
TO MAIKHANE KA RUKH KAISA
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2012, 12:19:06 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2012, 04:48:31 PM »
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wah waah waaah waaah
boohoooot  khooob saudagar g !!

bohooot umdaa likha hai jnab appne

dherooon daad or dil se mubarak-bad !!

boohot khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2012, 02:14:41 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
Aapki mehnat ka asar saaf dikh raha hai. har post behtar, behtar hotee jaa rahee hai. ehsaaso kee to vaise bhi kamee nahee aapke paas.
likhte rahiye..shubhkaamnaaye.
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2012, 02:18:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukrya abhi ji
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bahut b ahut shukriya khawahish ji............
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«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2012, 02:43:29 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shireen ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 06, 2012, 11:04:25 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya bansi ji.....
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«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2012, 01:31:02 PM »
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Baht bht shukriya roy babu
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