kaarnamaa-------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

by marhoom bahayaat on July 14, 2013, 05:14:01 PM
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                     jaate-jaate ek naya shosha chhodd gaya!
                     bin patthar chalaaye sheesha todd gaya!

                     qatra-e-khoon  ke  laale se paddh gaye!
                     jism  se jaane  kaise sab nichhod gaya!  

                     ooth te hain abb  sirf maangne ke liye!
                     haatho.n ko kambakhat aise marodd gaya!

                     rah kar saath bhi tanha-tanha hain sabhi!
                     rishto.n se nataa dushmani ka jodd gaya!

                     girte rahe aansoo jo ek-ek lafz se uske!
                     MARHOOM  ke wajood ko wo jinjhodd gaya!

                                       
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2013, 05:20:17 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2013, 06:38:53 PM »
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waah marhoom jee bahut khoob..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2013, 06:46:12 PM »
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qatra-e-khoon  ke  laale se paddh gaye!
jism  se jaane  kaise sab nichhod gaya!

bahot khoooooooob waaaaaah waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2013, 07:47:12 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2013, 08:41:17 PM »
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Waah Waah
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2013, 10:13:09 PM »
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                     jaate-jaate ek naya shosha chhodd gaya!
                     bin patthar chalaaye sheesha todd gaya!

                     qatra-e-khoon  ke  laale se paddh gaye!
                     jism  se jaane  kaise sab nichhod gaya!   

                     ooth te hain abb  sirf maangne ke liye!
                     haatho.n ko kambakhat aise marodd gaya!

                     rah kar saath bhi tanha-tanha hain sabhi!
                     rishto.n se nataa dushmani ka jodd gaya!

                     girte rahe aansoo jo ek-ek lafz se uske!
                     MARHOOM  ke wajood ko wo jinjhodd gaya!

                                       

waaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2013, 12:03:25 AM »
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waaaaaaaah.bahut khoob MB ji. har sher khoob hai.hazaron dili daad qubool kare..
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2013, 12:12:08 AM »
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bin patthar chalaaye sheesha todd gaya!

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Mehoromji,
really superb.
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2013, 12:19:46 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2013, 01:59:24 PM »
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                     jaate-jaate ek naya shosha chhodd gaya!
                     bin patthar chalaaye sheesha todd gaya!

                     qatra-e-khoon  ke  laale se paddh gaye!
                     jism  se jaane  kaise sab nichhod gaya!   

                     ooth te hain abb  sirf maangne ke liye!
                     haatho.n ko kambakhat aise marodd gaya!

                     rah kar saath bhi tanha-tanha hain sabhi!
                     rishto.n se nataa dushmani ka jodd gaya!

                     girte rahe aansoo jo ek-ek lafz se uske!
                     MARHOOM  ke wajood ko wo jinjhodd gaya!

                                       
waah waah bohut khoob lajawaab marhoom ji,
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2013, 12:47:20 AM »
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waah waah Marhoom Bahayaat saheb, bahut hi khoob, khususann matla bahut pasand aaya.
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2013, 03:33:28 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you,sir
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waah marhoom jee bahut khoob..happy9

thank you,sir
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2013, 08:17:29 AM »
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qatra-e-khoon  ke  laale se paddh gaye!
jism  se jaane  kaise sab nichhod gaya!

bahot khoooooooob waaaaaah waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

thank you,sir
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