<>* Kaash keh dete jo tum*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 15, 2010, 10:18:04 AM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2102 times)
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
Reply with quote
<>* Kaash keh dete jo tum*<>


Bhula dena chahega jis pal tu mujhe ee sanam
Usi pal hum tere jehan se hamesha ko mit jayenge
Laakh dhundha karo tum hume apne khyalon me
Lekin fir kabhi bhi na tum humko dhundh paoge.

Socha karti thi k har bar jab tum mujhse milne aaoge
Deke ek laal gulaab tum mujhse hale dil keh jaoge
Na de sake mere saamne gar tum pyaar ka paigaam apna
To khushbu bhare khat meri kitaab me rakh jaoge

Aaj kholi jab kitaab yaadon ki jisme tere khat k intezar k din likhe the
Kasak si uth gai dil me mere sochke k inn panno ko tere hath chhue the
Laga liya seene se uss mahekti kitaab ko jisme tere seene ki mahek basi thi
Sochti reh gai kaise main khud ko iss sab se kya dur kar paungi kabhi

Haan mujhe bhi yaad hai aaj tak wo der der se aana mera
Ghanto canteen me baithke chai k cup pite rehna tera
Meri khatir din raat tadapna machalna duaein karma
Lekin fir bhi apni mahobbat ka izhaar na kar paana

Kaash k keh dete tum samay rehte apne dil ki baat mujhe
Aaj iss tarah ye intezaar ki kasak dil me na chubh rahi hotti
Main ban gai hoti teri iss duniya k saamne sanam
Iss tarah  janaze k ruup me meri dooli na saji hoti…!!!

Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Keh Dete Ek Baar by sifar in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
...nahin dete... by dead heart in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
Ab Tod Dete Hain ............. !!! by Talat in Ghazals « 1 2 3  All »
Ghazal: kaaSh dunyaa meiN ye "kaaSh" na hotaa..! by DhavalRami in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
Jawab kya dete? by ishu_singh10 in Share: Poetry of Pain
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2010, 10:44:42 AM »
Reply with quote
itni tadap itna dard.. ek ek shabd ro raha hai.. dil ko andar tak hila gayi aapki ye kavita mujhe.. bahut bahut dard hai isme...  aisa dard jo kisi ko bhi kuch pal ke liye shaant kar de... kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine iske jawaab me bataayein kaisi lagi...




<>* Kaash keh dete jo tum*<>


Bhula dena chahega jis pal tu mujhe ee sanam
Usi pal hum tere jehan se hamesha ko mit jayenge
Laakh dhundha karo tum hume apne khyalon me
Lekin fir kabhi bhi na tum humko dhundh paoge.


kya itna aasaan hota hai apni saanson ko bhula dena sanam,
tu to meri zindagi hai, tujhe kaise bhulaa paayenge hum,
dil me tumhe basaake rakha hai humne kuch is tarha se,
ki tum duur jaane ki baat bhi karoge to mar jaayenge hum,




Socha karti thi k har bar jab tum mujhse milne aaoge
Deke ek laal gulaab tum mujhse hale dil keh jaoge
Na de sake mere saamne gar tum pyaar ka paigaam apna
To khushbu bhare khat meri kitaab me rakh jaoge


us intezaar ko maine kai baar tumhaari aankhon me dekha tha,
maine tumhaari mohabbat ka ehsaas tumhaari baaton me dekha tha,
kai baar main apne saath tumhaare liye gulaab aur khat laaya tha,
de na paaya kyun ki mere dil ne tumhaare inkaar ka dar dekha tha,




Aaj kholi jab kitaab yaadon ki jisme tere khat k intezar k din likhe the
Kasak si uth gai dil me mere sochke k inn panno ko tere hath chhue the
Laga liya seene se uss mahekti kitaab ko jisme tere seene ki mahek basi thi
Sochti reh gai kaise main khud ko iss sab se kya dur kar paungi kabhi


us kitaab ke panno me aaj bhi tujhe mera chehra dikhta hoga,
tera dil aaj bhi us kitaab ke panno pe mera naam likhta hoga,
kya hua agar main tujhse duur hoon , jism se tere paas nahi,
aaj bhi tera jeewan meri mohabbat ki khooshboo se mehekta hoga,




Haan mujhe bhi yaad hai aaj tak wo der der se aana mera
Ghanto canteen me baithke chai k cup pite rehna tera
Meri khatir din raat tadapna machalna duaein karma
Lekin fir bhi apni mahobbat ka izhaar na kar paana


chaai to is bahaane se peeta tha ki tujhe dekh sakun,
rukta tha ghanto tak is wajah se ki tere saath reh sakun,
kai baar socha ki kuch ho ki main apne dil ki baat kahun,
par khush hota raha soch ki dosti k naam pe hi tere saath reh sakun,




Kaash k keh dete tum samay rehte apne dil ki baat mujhe
Aaj iss tarah ye intezaar ki kasak dil me na chubh rahi hotti
Main ban gai hoti teri iss duniya k saamne sanam
Iss tarah  janaze k ruup me meri dooli na saji hoti…!!!


ab tadapta hai dil mera sochke ki kyun na keh paaya tujhe,
chaahta to aaj bhi hoon dil-o-jaan se main tujhe,
par aaj tu kisi aur ke zindagi ka chiraag hai mere sanam,
aaja tu laut ke mere paas ye baat main kaise keh sakunga tujhe....Huh?


Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 6 hours and 11 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2010, 10:55:06 AM »
Reply with quote
<>* Kaash keh dete jo tum*<>


Bhula dena chahega jis pal tu mujhe ee sanam
Usi pal hum tere jehan se hamesha ko mit jayenge
Laakh dhundha karo tum hume apne khyalon me
Lekin fir kabhi bhi na tum humko dhundh paoge.

Socha karti thi k har bar jab tum mujhse milne aaoge
Deke ek laal gulaab tum mujhse hale dil keh jaoge
Na de sake mere saamne gar tum pyaar ka paigaam apna
To khushbu bhare khat meri kitaab me rakh jaoge

Aaj kholi jab kitaab yaadon ki jisme tere khat k intezar k din likhe the
Kasak si uth gai dil me mere sochke k inn panno ko tere hath chhue the
Laga liya seene se uss mahekti kitaab ko jisme tere seene ki mahek basi thi
Sochti reh gai kaise main khud ko iss sab se kya dur kar paungi kabhi

Haan mujhe bhi yaad hai aaj tak wo der der se aana mera
Ghanto canteen me baithke chai k cup pite rehna tera
Meri khatir din raat tadapna machalna duaein karma
Lekin fir bhi apni mahobbat ka izhaar na kar paana

Kaash k keh dete tum samay rehte apne dil ki baat mujhe
Aaj iss tarah ye intezaar ki kasak dil me na chubh rahi hotti
Main ban gai hoti teri iss duniya k saamne sanam
Iss tarah  janaze k ruup me meri dooli na saji hoti…!!!


Waah waah Waah!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Anuji..

Aaj Aapne iss Kavita Se Mujhe Meri 9nth Standard Ki ek baat yaad dilati..

bahut bahut Khoob Anuji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2010, 10:56:04 AM »
Reply with quote
no comments kapil ji on this...
  Crying icon_flower Crying icon_flower Crying

itni tadap itna dard.. ek ek shabd ro raha hai.. dil ko andar tak hila gayi aapki ye kavita mujhe.. bahut bahut dard hai isme...  aisa dard jo kisi ko bhi kuch pal ke liye shaant kar de... kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine iske jawaab me bataayein kaisi lagi...



Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2010, 12:47:32 PM »
Reply with quote
Main kuch keh kar bhi keh nhi paa rahi hu kasak ji,bus itne kehna chahti hu ki apki iss kavita k title mein kaash,kaash hat jaye aur jo merra dil kisise kehna chahta hai vo main keh saku..per ye kaash,kaash hi banke reh jata hai aur aksar taqdir k aage mhbt ki bali chhadh jati hai,hamesha ki tarah behad umda likha hai ji........
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2010, 01:23:10 PM »
Reply with quote
kuch to kehte.. waise ye ji lagaana kyun shuru kar diya aapne fir se...?

no comments kapil ji on this...
  Crying icon_flower Crying icon_flower Crying

Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2010, 12:16:26 AM »
Reply with quote
Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Aapne ahsaas kafi achche kahe hai daad, Manzar kashiN bhi behad khoob rahi..... daad hazir hai.... Usual Smile

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile

         

Logged
Rajesh Harish
Guest
«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2010, 07:35:55 AM »
Reply with quote
Good one Anamika Ji
Logged
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2013, 04:39:19 AM »
Reply with quote
Thnku every1 for liking......
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 07:16:25 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.133 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer