Kab Tak

by Roja on July 08, 2009, 03:54:20 PM

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Roja

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Kab tak chalega aapki baaton ka silsila,
Ek din toh khatam kijiye wadon ka silsila..

Yu hi batakti firthi rahungi jahan mein,
Kya yu hi toot jayega saanson ka silsila..

Vo vewafa ulajhte rahe baat-baat per,
Badla nahi hai meri wafawon ka silsila..

Unse juda huyi hu toh neendein hi ud gayi,
Ab kaise pass aayega khwabon ka silsila..

Ye zindagi safar mein toh aadhi huyi "Roja"
Kab tak nibhaye rasmon riwazon ka silsila..


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 04:56:44 PM »

KITNA HASIN KALAAM HAI ROJA YE AAPKA
ALLAH KABHI RUKE NAHIN LIKHNE KA SILSILA

KYA KHOOB AUR RYTHEM ME LIKHA HAI ROJA JI
WAH WAH BAHUT KHOOB

SARVESH RASTOGI


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Alam Qazi

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 05:11:56 PM »

Yu_nhi bhatakti Firti Rahungi jahaa'n mein
kya yu_nhi Toot jayega, saanso'n ka silsila

very Touching words....

khaas taur se is sher mein, sawaal karne ka andaz bahot khubsurat hai....

_____________Alam


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Bharat

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 05:28:47 PM »

Hello Roja,
Very nice....Aap ne bahut achcha likha hai.....


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poppoetry

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 06:03:04 PM »

bahut khooooob Roja di......bahut pyara......dard bhare swaal.... Applause


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madhuwesh

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 10:53:21 PM »

Wow Roja very beautiful creation,really touching.excellent.
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:clapping:wonderful lines by Alam ji.


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 11:04:36 PM »

Bohot khoob Roja...behtareen hai...or achhi dua di rastogi ji ne...aameen.


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Pooja

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 11:09:09 PM »

wow too Good Roja!!! Good creation!!


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cara

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Re: Kab Tak

«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 05:20:04 AM »

kya baat hai roja ji......

KAB TAK RAHUNGI JUDA, MEIN BIN TERE,
KAB KHAAWB HOGE POORE,TERE SANG MERE.

HADD KAR DI HAI AAPNE,AB TO AAJAAO SANAM,
KI ZINDAGI BAR TAK,NA RAHEJAAEY JUDAI KA GUM.