Kabhi aanaa (by vb)

by vb on September 20, 2013, 09:44:08 PM
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Kabhi aanaa
Kabhi aanaa
Agar kuchh waqt mil jayay
Tumhen duniya k melon say
Kabhi fursat agar paao
Jo garhasti jhamelon say
Yahan!
Khaamoshiyon, veeraaniyon k dasht main, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa

Yahan vb k marqad par
Jahan koi nahi aataa
Qaba phoolon ki phelaanay
Yahan koi nahi laata
Yahan is boorhay bargad par
Parinday tak nahi aatay
Sivaayay aisi chirya kay
Jo rasta bhool bethi ho
Yahan say door rehti ho
Faqat kuch der sastaa kar
Faqat kuch der chilaa kar
Ufaq main doob jaati hay
Yahan taareek raaton main diya jalta nahi, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa

Yunhi khaamoshe bethen gay
Yunhi khamoshe, joon kuch saal pehlay bethetay thay hum
Na tum kehti na sunti thi
Na main kehta na suntan tha
Magar har baat ik doojay ki dono jaan letay thay
Yahan taareekiyon, tanhaaiyon k dasht main, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa
Kabhi aanaa

Agar kuchh waqt mil jayay
Tumhen duniya k melon say
Kabhi fursat agar paao
Jo garhasti jhamelon say
Yahan!
Khaamoshiyon, veeraaniyon k dasht main, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa
Kabhi aanaa
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2013, 10:01:29 PM »
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Quote from: vb on September 20, 2013, 09:44:08 PM


Kabhi aanaa
Kabhi aanaa
Agar kuchh waqt mil jayay
Tumhen duniya k melon say
Kabhi fursat agar paao
Jo garhasti jhamelon say
Yahan!
Khaamoshiyon, veeraaniyon k dasht main, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa

Yahan vb k marqad par
Jahan koi nahi aataa
Qaba phoolon ki phelaanay
Yahan koi nahi laata
Yahan is boorhay bargad par
Parinday tak nahi aatay
Sivaayay aisi chirya kay
Jo rasta bhool bethi ho
Yahan say door rehti ho
Faqat kuch der sustaa kar
Faqat kuch der chilaa kar
Ufaq main doob jaati hay
Yahan taareek raaton main diya jalta nahi, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa

Yunhi khaamoshe bethen gay
Yunhi khamoshe, joon kuch saal pehlay bethetay thay hum
Na tum kehti na sunti thi
Na main kehta na suntan tha
Magar har baat ik doojay ki dono jaan letay thay
Yahan taareekiyon, tanhaaiyon k dasht main, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa
Kabhi aanaa

Agar kuchh waqt mil jayay
Tumhen duniya k melon say
Kabhi fursat agar paao
Jo garhasti jhamelon say
Yahan!
Khaamoshiyon, veeraaniyon k dasht main, jaanaan!
Kabhi aanaa
Kabhi aanaa
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2013, 10:15:06 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Vb ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2013, 11:39:48 PM »
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Very touchy
Dil ki gahraaiyon se likha hai aapne.

Likhne jyada aata naheen...samjhta hun theek se..is par bhi shaq hai
par jo dil ko accha laga ..kah diya
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2013, 12:32:04 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2013, 01:27:24 AM »
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waah waah behad umda likha hai vb jee..

Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2013, 04:04:06 AM »
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VB jee Aadaab...!


WaaH janab WaaH kia kahne jee... aapki nazme aur aapka andaaz qaqai behad khoob hai...

itni khoob nazm padhi hai ke dil shaad ho gaye behad gehre aur dilfareb ahsaassaat se labrez nazm hai...

Is umdaa nazm par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye, bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2013, 08:49:16 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2013, 09:11:02 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2013, 07:34:45 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaah bahut hi pyaari nazm se nawaaza hai aapne.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaad..
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shukriya aap sub ka................
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