Kabhi Mandir Par Jaa Baithe, Kabhi Masjid Par Jaa baithe

by khwaish on September 30, 2010, 09:35:57 AM
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Kya Banane Aaye the Kya Bana baithe
Kahi Mandir bana Baithe, Kahi Masjid bana Baithe
Hum Se to Jaat Achi hai Parindon Ki
Kabhi mandir par Jaa Baithe
Kabhi Masjid Par Jaa Baithe...
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2010, 09:44:12 AM »
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kab ishwar ko mana kab allah ka nam liya
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha

koi puchh leta to kya keheta
kya majhab he mera jab paida hua tha
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha

me kisse prarthna karta hun
meri sunta azaan kaun he
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha

hath jodkar allah ko bulau
ya musibat me ram ram chillau
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2010, 11:41:37 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai khwaish ji aur abhi ji...
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2010, 11:46:05 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 30, 2010, 09:35:57 AM
Kya Banane Aaye the Kya Bana baithe
Kahi Mandir bana Baithe, Kahi Masjid bana Baithe
Hum Se to Jaat Achi hai Parindon Ki
Kabhi mandir par Jaa Baithe
Kabhi Masjid Par Jaa Baithe...
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 30, 2010, 09:44:12 AM
kab ishwar ko mana kab allah ka nam liya
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha

koi puchh leta to kya keheta
kya majhab he mera jab paida hua tha
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha

me kisse prarthna karta hun
meri sunta azaan kaun he
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha

hath jodkar allah ko bulau
ya musibat me ram ram chillau
meri mano to sach mujhe pata na tha


app donon ki shyari padkar bahut accha laga

has really deep meaning if one understands

aise hi likhte rahiyega

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2010, 12:17:17 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Aapka thought bahut achcha hai.... hume achcha laga daad kabool kijiye janab...... Usual Smile

And Abhi jee ...... Kia kaheN janab... Bahut umdaa bahut sahiN kaha hai aapne..... Dil se daad hazir hai janab......

Likhate rhaiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2010, 06:40:16 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 30, 2010, 09:35:57 AM
Kya Banane Aaye the Kya Bana baithe
Kahi Mandir bana Baithe, Kahi Masjid bana Baithe
Hum Se to Jaat Achi hai Parindon Ki
Kabhi mandir par Jaa Baithe
Kabhi Masjid Par Jaa Baithe...

Very Impressive Indeed ....khwaish Ji !

bahut sahi baat kahi hai aapne ... aaj ke sandharbh me .... nice lines .... dil se daad hazir hai likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 12:52:25 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai ap dono ne Khwaish ji aur Abhi ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2010, 06:22:18 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on September 30, 2010, 11:46:05 AM
app donon ki shyari padkar bahut accha laga

has really deep meaning if one understands

aise hi likhte rahiyega

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 30, 2010, 12:17:17 PM
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Aapka thought bahut achcha hai.... hume achcha laga daad kabool kijiye janab...... Usual Smile

And Abhi jee ...... Kia kaheN janab... Bahut umdaa bahut sahiN kaha hai aapne..... Dil se daad hazir hai janab......

Likhate rhaiye.......
Khush O aabaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 01, 2010, 12:52:25 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai ap dono ne Khwaish ji aur Abhi ji...!!!
Quote from: Anshumali on September 30, 2010, 06:40:16 PM
Very Impressive Indeed ....khwaish Ji !

bahut sahi baat kahi hai aapne ... aaj ke sandharbh me .... nice lines .... dil se daad hazir hai likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath....

aap sabhi ka shukriyya hosla badhane ke liye ..khwaish bhaii ne ek chhota sa dhaga kheencha to ehssaso ne sach ko likhne ki thodi si himmat de di or hamne lkh diya bas...
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2010, 03:05:42 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 30, 2010, 09:35:57 AM
Kya Banane Aaye the Kya Bana baithe
Kahi Mandir bana Baithe, Kahi Masjid bana Baithe
Hum Se to Jaat Achi hai Parindon Ki
Kabhi mandir par Jaa Baithe
Kabhi Masjid Par Jaa Baithe...
Khawaish acha likha aap ney lakin .... JAAT ....ka matlab kia hai
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«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2011, 07:46:26 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 30, 2010, 09:35:57 AM
Kya Banane Aaye the Kya Bana baithe
Kahi Mandir bana Baithe, Kahi Masjid bana Baithe
Hum Se to Jaat Achi hai Parindon Ki
Kabhi mandir par Jaa Baithe
Kabhi Masjid Par Jaa Baithe...

Bahut durust kahaa aap ne khwaish jee! parinde, khushboo baadal,hawaa ye sabhee sarhadoN se pare haiN...sarhade to sirf insaani dimaaghoN me hee khinchee hui haiN.....
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2011, 08:03:45 AM »
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kaise kahen ke ab hum kahan aa bethe
bana kar deewaren mazhab ki hum khud ko hi chupa bethe

kabhi taraash kar pattharo ko
bhagwaan ki murat bana bethe
kabhi dekh kar mazhabi sarhaden
hum insaniyat ko hi bhula bethe
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2012, 09:23:54 PM »
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Khwaish Saheb. Dil Khush ho gaya aapka sher padh ke.
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