-----/// Kabhi to aap muskuraaye honge /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 15, 2012, 04:11:27 PM
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raah-e-zindagi me aapke kai hamsafar aaye honge,
kisi na kisi se aap bhi dil apnaa lagaaye honge,
chaahe abhi tanha hon bewafaai ka ilzaam lagaake,
magar kabhi to unke hone se aap muskuraaye honge,

yaad karke unhe kai baar aap aansoo bahaaye honge,
aur wo kai kai baar aapke khwaabon me aaye honge,
kya huwa jo rishta aaj toot gaya, par unki baatein
kabhi to yaad banke aapko akele me gudgudaaye honge,

likhe huye unke khat kabhi to aapko yaad aaye honge,
unki kisi tasveer ko dekh kabhi to aap sharmaaye honge,
kis andaaz me aapko chheda karte the kuch waqt pehle,
wo sharaaratein kabhi to aapko bahut yaad aaye honge,

aaj rulaa rahe hain, par kabhi to wo aapko hasaaye honge,
aaj nahi, par kabhi to aapko apne dil me wo basaaye honge,
aaj unka saath nahi hai to aap khud ko haaraa samajhte ho,
kabhi to unke saath har jung jeetne ke kasam khaaye honge,

kya aisa hai ki aapke aansuon se wo aapko samajh paaye honge,
kya unki khushhaal zindagi me kabhi aap unko yaad aaye honge,
kya faida aise kisi ke liye aansu bahaane ka jo aapka nahi,
muskuraao, jaise unse milne se pehle kabhi aap muskuraaye honge...


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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2012, 04:33:17 PM »
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 Applause Applause sahi kaha aapne
milte hain rah rah men apne naseeb se
kuchh dete hain gam, kuchh khushi apne naseeb se
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2012, 04:58:23 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot achcha likha hai aapne hriday ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2012, 05:19:03 PM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2012, 05:36:43 PM »
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Kya baat hai hriday jee
aap jaisa likhne vaala koi nahee..
bas dil ki avaaj..bahut bahut khoob
bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam kya kahne.
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 06:18:05 PM »
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kapil jee Aadaab!

kia baat hai janab... gazab dhaa rahe ho aajkal... Usual Smile
behad khoob aur umdaa khayaaloN ko lafz diye hai janab..
Aur bayaani bhi behad perfect huyi... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par dheroN daaad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye...

Aur aise hi khoobsurat nagmoN se YO ko roshan karte rahiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2012, 06:54:26 PM »
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bohot khoob
bs dil se ye rau dena chahuga
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2012, 02:25:27 AM »
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Bhut khoobsurat bhai.
Hamari mubarakbaad kabool farmaaye.
Muhabbat ki nazme , kalams aap bhut khoobsurat likhte ho.
Aapki etni achchi poem par ak choota sa Rau kurbaan kar raha hooN.
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2012, 07:19:08 AM »
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Bohat Hi Khub! Last line bohat hi badiya bani hai! Jazbaaton ko bohat aache se bayan kiya hai aap ne...

Muskurao Jaise Unse Pehle Milne Se Pehle Muskuraye Honge...

Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2012, 06:17:07 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Bansi ji .. aapne bhi khoob kahaa do panktiyon me....!!!

Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on June 15, 2012, 04:33:17 PM
Applause Applause sahi kaha aapne
milte hain rah rah men apne naseeb se
kuchh dete hain gam, kuchh khushi apne naseeb se
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2012, 02:52:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Heer ji....!!!

Quote from: @Heer@ on June 15, 2012, 04:58:23 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot achcha likha hai aapne hriday ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2012, 04:43:45 PM »
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thanks a lot Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 15, 2012, 05:19:03 PM
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2012, 02:10:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji... !!!

Quote from: mkv on June 15, 2012, 05:36:43 PM
Kya baat hai hriday jee
aap jaisa likhne vaala koi nahee..
bas dil ki avaaj..bahut bahut khoob
bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam kya kahne.
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2012, 05:47:16 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Parwaaz ji... hamaare is koshish me itni badi baat nahi thi jitni aapne iski taarif kar di.. ye to aapke nazron ki khoobsurti hai jo meri chhoti se chhoti koshish ko bhi aap apne khoobsurat shabdon se sajaa dete hain... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 15, 2012, 06:18:05 PM
kapil jee Aadaab!

kia baat hai janab... gazab dhaa rahe ho aajkal... Usual Smile
behad khoob aur umdaa khayaaloN ko lafz diye hai janab..
Aur bayaani bhi behad perfect huyi... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par dheroN daaad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye...

Aur aise hi khoobsurat nagmoN se YO ko roshan karte rahiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2012, 01:22:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Roy ji....!!!

Quote from: roy on June 15, 2012, 06:54:26 PM
bohot khoob
bs dil se ye rau dena chahuga
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