-----/// Kabhi to aap muskuraaye honge /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 15, 2012, 04:11:27 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 27, 2012, 01:31:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa bhaai....!!!

Bhut khoobsurat bhai.
Hamari mubarakbaad kabool farmaaye.
Muhabbat ki nazme , kalams aap bhut khoobsurat likhte ho.
Aapki etni achchi poem par ak choota sa Rau kurbaan kar raha hooN.

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«Reply #16 on: June 27, 2012, 04:42:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shireen ji....!!!

Bohat Hi Khub! Last line bohat hi badiya bani hai! Jazbaaton ko bohat aache se bayan kiya hai aap ne...

Muskurao Jaise Unse Pehle Milne Se Pehle Muskuraye Honge...

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