KACHARAADAAN (DUSTBIN)

by NETRAPAL on May 28, 2008, 01:04:49 PM
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Ek Bahas ke doraan mere mitro ne kaha kya kacharaa daan pe koi kuch likh saktaa hai to sathiyo ek koshish maine kee hai kaha tak safal hoo ye to aap batayenge..

Sonataa hoo daastaa  apnee sunlo aye insaan
Kya khta hai  meri jo jteeta le kar seene me toofaan

Jeeta hoo pee kar nafarat mai jamane kee aaj bhee
Dastoor wahee poorana nibhate hoo  mai aaj bhee

Rahata hoo har galee me har choraho pe saharo kee
Karte hai nafrat mujhse kyo n samaj paya hoo mai abhee

Har sahar kee jaroorat hoo, nahi karata koi pyar fir bhee
Door se lete sidok muh  ko,  dhak lete hai log  naak bhee

Fir bhee ate hai roj subah shyam jaroorat se bandhe hue
Ek hee jajba liyee jee raha hoo mai aaj bhee

Isee jaha ne banya hai mujhe nam bhee diya to kacharadaan
Dhak kar mujh roj nit naye naye ate hai naadaan
Dekhkar bebasee unkee,  muskarata hoo kabhi kabhi

Haa kachare daan hoo mai, samete hoo gandgee sabkee
Aatee hai sadan mujhme, sadtee hai juthan jahaa kee
Kya hai paas insaan ke dene ke liye mujhe………………
gandgee hee gandgee samete wajood wo jee raha hai aaj bhee

netra..
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2008, 03:42:55 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob Netra ji!! bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2008, 02:11:05 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 28, 2008, 03:42:55 PM
Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob Netra ji!! bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!

thanks pooja ji

netra,,,,,
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2008, 03:07:32 AM »
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Netra ji,

kya kamaal ka chayan kiya hai aapne aur kitni behatareen tulna ki hein kachraadaan mein aur manushya ke antar mein.vaakai sochne pe majboor karti hein aapke likhe shabd.

Prateek.
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2008, 12:51:02 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 31, 2008, 03:07:32 AM
Netra ji,

kya kamaal ka chayan kiya hai aapne aur kitni behatareen tulna ki hein kachraadaan mein aur manushya ke antar mein.vaakai sochne pe majboor karti hein aapke likhe shabd.

Prateek.

thanks deepak ji

netra....
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2008, 12:56:35 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Netra Ji.... Applause

Aapki har peshkash se kuch seekhne ko milta hai !
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2008, 01:53:55 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 31, 2008, 12:56:35 PM
Bohot Khoob Netra Ji.... Applause

Aapki har peshkash se kuch seekhne ko milta hai !

THANKS CELIMERA

NETRA...
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2008, 09:32:47 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob netraji..aap ki gehri soch ki daad deta hoon..bahut khoob!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2008, 02:01:04 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 01, 2008, 09:32:47 AM
bahut bahut khoob netraji..aap ki gehri soch ki daad deta hoon..bahut khoob!!! Applause Applause Applause

thanks sir for reply

netra......
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2008, 02:18:34 AM »
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Har sahar kee jaroorat hoo, nahi karata koi pyar fir bhee
Door se lete sidok muh  ko,  dhak lete hai log  naak bhee

Fir bhee ate hai roj subah shyam jaroorat se bandhe hue
Ek hee jajba liyee jee raha hoo mai aaj bhee

Netrapal jee.... bahut khoob bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2008, 05:16:13 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on June 02, 2008, 02:18:34 AM
Netrapal jee.... bahut khoob bahut khoob  Applause

thanks sonia ji

netra...
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2008, 05:52:29 AM »
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Umda khayaalat, insaan aur koodadaan ka faraq kya hai batlaya gaya hai... Wah Wah
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2008, 06:01:40 AM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 28, 2008, 01:04:49 PM
Ek Bahas ke doraan mere mitro ne kaha kya kacharaa daan pe koi kuch likh saktaa hai to sathiyo ek koshish maine kee hai kaha tak safal hoo ye to aap batayenge..

Sonataa hoo daastaa  apnee sunlo aye insaan
Kya khta hai  meri jo jteeta le kar seene me toofaan

Jeeta hoo pee kar nafarat mai jamane kee aaj bhee
Dastoor wahee poorana nibhate hoo  mai aaj bhee

Rahata hoo har galee me har choraho pe saharo kee
Karte hai nafrat mujhse kyo n samaj paya hoo mai abhee

Har sahar kee jaroorat hoo, nahi karata koi pyar fir bhee
Door se lete sidok muh  ko,  dhak lete hai log  naak bhee

Fir bhee ate hai roj subah shyam jaroorat se bandhe hue
Ek hee jajba liyee jee raha hoo mai aaj bhee

Isee jaha ne banya hai mujhe nam bhee diya to kacharadaan
Dhak kar mujh roj nit naye naye ate hai naadaan
Dekhkar bebasee unkee,  muskarata hoo kabhi kabhi

Haa kachare daan hoo mai, samete hoo gandgee sabkee
Aatee hai sadan mujhme, sadtee hai juthan jahaa kee
Kya hai paas insaan ke dene ke liye mujhe………………
gandgee hee gandgee samete wajood wo jee raha hai aaj bhee

netra..

Again.. A Very Innovative thinking Netra..  Thumbs UP
Nice Work...  Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2008, 02:07:53 AM »
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thanks majiya ji,

bina mere bhee taraste hai log
apnee hee gandgee se darte hai log

nahi karta hai yad koi baleedaan mera
roj ate hai or kachare ko fenk jate hai log

kaisa ye samaaj hai, hai kaise ye log
karte hai hai ayaasee...............
nishanee ayaashee ko fenk jate hai log

netra........
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2008, 06:00:36 AM »
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Buhat kamaal, is dafa bhi tasalsul barqarar rakha hai...
Wah jee wah,,, Netra jee...
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