Kachche Dhaage............... !!!!!!

by Talat on August 08, 2008, 01:36:21 PM
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Aaj ek lambe arse baad kuch likha hai maine....shayad mere doston ko pasand aaye....!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2008, 02:01:10 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah!!! Kaya baat hai!! ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai Celmira apne!! Bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2008, 06:15:33 PM »
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Thankyou ! Pooja  icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2008, 06:47:03 PM »
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Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai!
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2008, 08:54:15 PM »
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Thanks so much Bharat Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2008, 02:01:52 PM »
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Kachche dhaagon main lipti ye zindagi,
Naazuk sheeshe pe hai chal rahi

Har jaata lamha kuch aur daraar daale
Dil yeh dewaana na hai dekhe na pehchaane

Ek ek pal toot rahe hain yeh dhaage
Aur dil na jaane kis aor hai bhaage

Na jaane kab ek pal main sab ruk jaayega
Khul jaayenge dhaage, sheesha toot jaayega !!
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2008, 02:19:37 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 08, 2008, 01:36:21 PM
Aaj ek lambe arse baad kuch likha hai maine....shayad mere doston ko pasand aaye....!!!




kat jaayen jade, hare patte sookh jaate hain
bulbule paani ke jaise aksar phoot jaate hain,
talatkahte hain sabr ka fal meetha hota hai.....aaj chakh ke dekh liya....bahoot intzar ke baad aapne likh..hai aur behtreen ban pada hai.....
badhai aapko

kuch ban pada aapki nazar...

bulbule ka wazud dekho kitna mukhtsar,
paani me paida hua, mila paani me phootkar,
paida bewazah hua, mita bhi bas isi tarah,
bulbula kah do mujhe, khatm ab mera safar

 
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2008, 02:23:56 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 09, 2008, 02:01:52 PM
Kachche dhaagon main lipti ye zindagi,
Naazuk sheeshe pe hai chal rahi

Har jaata lamha kuch aur daraar daale
Dil yeh dewaana na hai dekhe na pehchaane

Ek ek pal toot rahe hain yeh dhaage
Aur dil na jaane kis aor hai bhaage

Na jaane kab ek pal main sab ruk jaayega
Khul jaayenge dhaage, sheesha toot jaayega !!



nice again talat Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2008, 02:52:20 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 09, 2008, 02:19:37 PM
kat jaayen jade, hare patte sookh jaate hain
bulbule paani ke jaise aksar phoot jaate hain,
talatkahte hain sabr ka fal meetha hota hai.....aaj chakh ke dekh liya....bahoot intzar ke baad aapne likh..hai aur behtreen ban pada hai.....
badhai aapko

kuch ban pada aapki nazar...

bulbule ka wazud dekho kitna mukhtsar,
paani me paida hua, mila paani me phootkar,
paida bewazah hua, mita bhi bas isi tarah,
bulbula kah do mujhe, khatm ab mera safar

 

Shukriya Sanjeev, aapko pasand aaya....aapne itni hausla afzaai ki  icon_flower

chaar lines main bohot kuch keh gaye aap....


Bulbula paani ka meri zindagani hai
Benaam bewajah si jaise ek kahani hai

Dolti hai yunhi hawaaon ke paron par
Khud ko mitaane chali dekho deewani hai
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2008, 04:25:58 PM »
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bahoot khoob talat ji

ye bahati hawen, ye panchi, ye surmai si shaam
aaj fir se badla gaya hai irada marne ka


 
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2008, 08:12:24 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 08, 2008, 01:36:21 PM
Aaj ek lambe arse baad kuch likha hai maine....shayad mere doston ko pasand aaye....!!!




Bohot achha likha aapne celmira ji.... chote se waqfe ke baad dobara aap ka kalaam padh kar khushi hui.
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2008, 08:14:04 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 09, 2008, 02:01:52 PM
Kachche dhaagon main lipti ye zindagi,
Naazuk sheeshe pe hai chal rahi

Har jaata lamha kuch aur daraar daale
Dil yeh dewaana na hai dekhe na pehchaane

Ek ek pal toot rahe hain yeh dhaage
Aur dil na jaane kis aor hai bhaage

Na jaane kab ek pal main sab ruk jaayega
Khul jaayenge dhaage, sheesha toot jaayega !!



ek baar phir achha likhaa....
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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2008, 08:15:54 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 09, 2008, 02:19:37 PM
kuch ban pada aapki nazar...

bulbule ka wazud dekho kitna mukhtsar,
paani me paida hua, mila paani me phootkar,
paida bewazah hua, mita bhi bas isi tarah,
bulbula kah do mujhe, khatm ab mera safar


Bohot behtareen janaab.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2008, 08:18:14 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 09, 2008, 02:52:20 PM
chaar lines main bohot kuch keh gaye aap....


Bulbula paani ka meri zindagani hai
Benaam bewajah si jaise ek kahani hai

Dolti hai yunhi hawaaon ke paron par
Khud ko mitaane chali dekho deewani hai

Achha jawaab!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2008, 09:05:54 PM »
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