Kachche Dhaage............... !!!!!!

by Talat on August 08, 2008, 01:36:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 10, 2008, 02:49:53 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 08, 2008, 01:36:21 PM
Aaj ek lambe arse baad kuch likha hai maine....shayad mere doston ko pasand aaye....!!!




Ek lambe arse k baad behtareen peshkash Celmira sis...
Bahut khoob ... Applause  Applause
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«Reply #16 on: August 10, 2008, 02:52:15 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 09, 2008, 02:01:52 PM
Kachche dhaagon main lipti ye zindagi,
Naazuk sheeshe pe hai chal rahi

Har jaata lamha kuch aur daraar daale
Dil yeh dewaana na hai dekhe na pehchaane

Ek ek pal toot rahe hain yeh dhaage
Aur dil na jaane kis aor hai bhaage

Na jaane kab ek pal main sab ruk jaayega
Khul jaayenge dhaage, sheesha toot jaayega !!

Wah wah Celmira  Applause  Applause

Last line bahut accha ban pada hai... Daad hazir hai ..
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Roja
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«Reply #17 on: August 10, 2008, 02:57:24 AM »
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Very good reply Sayyid ji..
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«Reply #18 on: August 10, 2008, 02:59:35 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 09, 2008, 02:19:37 PM

bulbule ka wazud dekho kitna mukhtsar,
paani me paida hua, mila paani me phootkar,
paida bewazah hua, mita bhi bas isi tarah,
bulbula kah do mujhe, khatm ab mera safar

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«Reply #19 on: August 10, 2008, 01:49:10 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 10, 2008, 02:57:24 AM
Very good reply Sayyid ji..

Meherbaani mhohtarama...
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Talat
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«Reply #20 on: August 12, 2008, 05:52:14 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 09, 2008, 04:25:58 PM
bahoot khoob talat ji

ye bahati hawen, ye panchi, ye surmai si shaam
aaj fir se badla gaya hai irada marne ka


 

bohot khoob Sanjeev

Zindagi se yoon to shikayat nahin koi
Zinda rehne ki magar hasrat bhi na rahi
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«Reply #21 on: August 12, 2008, 05:53:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 09, 2008, 08:12:24 PM

Bohot achha likha aapne celmira ji.... chote se waqfe ke baad dobara aap ka kalaam padh kar khushi hui.


Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 09, 2008, 08:14:04 PM
ek baar phir achha likhaa....

Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid
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«Reply #22 on: August 12, 2008, 06:02:56 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Sayyid  Applause  Applause

Jawab jald dene ki koshish karenge...abhi kuch ban nahin pa raha  BangHead
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«Reply #23 on: August 12, 2008, 06:05:35 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 10, 2008, 02:49:53 AM
Ek lambe arse k baad behtareen peshkash Celmira sis...
Bahut khoob ... Applause  Applause

Quote from: Roja on August 10, 2008, 02:52:15 AM
Wah wah Celmira  Applause  Applause

Last line bahut accha ban pada hai... Daad hazir hai ..

Thanks so much Roja...I m glad you liked the creations  icon_flower
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«Reply #24 on: August 12, 2008, 06:08:25 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 12, 2008, 06:02:56 PM
Bohot Khoob Sayyid  Applause  Applause

Jawab jald dene ki koshish karenge...abhi kuch ban nahin pa raha  BangHead



Chaliye!! aap ko pasnad aaya, ye jawaab bhi bohot he hamaare liye.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: September 22, 2008, 06:37:28 PM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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