KAHAA..... "MohanN"

by surindarn on March 03, 2015, 08:18:22 AM
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DEKHNAA TAQREER KEE LAZAT KE JO USS NE KAHAA
KYAA KHOOB HEE WOH SAMJHAA JO MEIN NE ABB TAK NAA KAHAA!

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The first line iss not mine. The meaning of these lines is:
Mark ye, the beauty of speech whatever he said,
I felt as if it were a depiction of my own thoughts.
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2015, 09:12:00 AM »
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bohat khub sir ji waaaahhhhhh
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2015, 10:20:45 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on March 03, 2015, 08:18:22 AM
Two liner.

DEKHNAA TAQDEER KEE LAZAT KE JO USS NE KAHAA
KYAA KHOOB HEE WOH SAMJHAA JO MEIN NE ABB TAK NAA KAHAA!

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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maine toh samjhne ke liye apnaa BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead phhodd liya per samjh nahin payaa.
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2015, 10:21:14 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2015, 01:22:09 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2015, 03:48:22 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maine toh samjhne ke liye apnaa BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead phhodd liya per samjh nahin payaa.

DEKHNAA TAQREER KEE LAZAT KE JO USS NE KAHAA
KYAA KHOOB HEE WOH SAMJHAA JO MEIN NE ABB TAK NAA KAHAA!
Qalab Sahib aap samajh nahin paaye iss mein galtee merii hai, first line mein ne ek lafaz main galat likh diyaa thaa. The word Taqdeer should be Taqreer aur yeh line merii apnee nahin hai, mujhe theek se yaad nahin shayad Mir Taqi Mir kee hai, main ne likha nahin thaa kyun ke mujhe yaad nahin aarahaa thaa. Main iss sher kaa puraa matlab neeche likh rahaa hoon.
Mark ye, the beauty of speech, whatever he said,
I felt as if it were a depiction of my own thoughts.
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2015, 03:45:54 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on March 03, 2015, 09:12:00 AM
bohat khub sir ji waaaahhhhhh
bahut shukria Jeet Jee.
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2015, 04:57:49 PM »
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Quote from: surindarn on March 03, 2015, 08:18:22 AM
Two liner.

DEKHNAA TAQREER KEE LAZAT KE JO USS NE KAHAA
KYAA KHOOB HEE WOH SAMJHAA JO MEIN NE ABB TAK NAA KAHAA!

Surindar.N                                                         "MohanN"

The first line iss not mine. The meaning of these lines is:
Mark ye, the beauty of speech whatever he said,
I felt as if it were a depiction of my own thoughts.




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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2015, 04:08:45 AM »
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bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
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