kahan se laun mein !!

by deepika_divya on September 24, 2009, 04:41:40 PM
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Nam Ankhon mea Alfaaz kaha se laun Mein.
Kho gaye Ashaar mere, Ghazal kahan se laun Mein

likhna jo chaha maine khat mea Haal- e- Dil Apna
Par unn Kagaj ke Tukdo mea Pyaar kahan se laun Mein

Khud Na keh sake woh Naamabaar se kehlwa diya
Naamabaar ke Ankho mea woh ehsaas kahan se laun Mein

Tum jo chod gaye ho Yaadein Zindagi bhar ki sanam
Unn yaado ko Sanjoye, Woh Aashiyaana kahan se laun mein

Tum jo chale aaye khud ko Bhulane ka Waada lene
Apne Anso Chupa saku aisa pathar dil kahan se laun Mein


Divya
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2009, 06:07:19 AM »
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Wah Sophi ji really touching n mindblowing creation,bahut khoob ,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2009, 04:18:44 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 25, 2009, 06:07:19 AM
Wah Sophi ji really touching n mindblowing creation,bahut khoob ,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so much Madhu
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2009, 04:27:28 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 24, 2009, 04:41:40 PM
Nam Ankhon mea Alfaaz kaha se laun Mein.
Kho gaye Ashaar mere, Ghazal kahan se laun Mein

likhe jo chaha khat mea Haal- e- Dil Apna
Par unn Kagaj ke Tukdo mea Pyaar kahan se laun Mein

Khud Na keh sake woh Naamabaar se kehlwa diya
Naamabaar ke Ankho mea woh ehsaas kahan se laun Mein

Tum jo chod gaye ho Yaadein Zindagi bhar ke
Unn yaado ko Sanjoye, Woh Aashiyaana kahan se laun mein

Tum jo chale aaye khud ko Bhulane ka Waada lene
Apne Anso Chupa saku aisa pathar dil kahan se laun Mein


Divya

Wah sweet Divya bahut hi accha likha hai tumne yaar   Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2009, 05:59:40 PM »
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Bahut accha Likha Hai Divya.. Dard Bhare Yeh Alfaaz Seedhe Dil tak Utar Gaye.. Bahut Bahut Pyara likha hai.. Applause Applause


Ek Aansoo Gira Dil Par, Dil Ishq Pe Nisaar Ho Gaya,
Kuch Der Pahale Patthar Tha, Mom Sa Pighal Gaya...!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2010, 03:50:50 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on September 27, 2009, 05:59:40 PM
Bahut accha Likha Hai Divya.. Dard Bhare Yeh Alfaaz Seedhe Dil tak Utar Gaye.. Bahut Bahut Pyara likha hai.. Applause Applause


Ek Aansoo Gira Dil Par, Dil Ishq Pe Nisaar Ho Gaya,
Kuch Der Pahale Patthar Tha, Mom Sa Pighal Gaya...!!!


**~** Mann **~**

Thank you so Much !

Aapne bhi Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai !
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2010, 07:16:25 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2010, 04:11:26 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 07, 2010, 07:16:25 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so so so Much Sheba ji !
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2010, 04:12:43 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 09, 2010, 11:39:51 AM
behad acha likha hai,nice poem Sophi ji Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa,,, Kaash ji !
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2012, 04:21:45 PM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aapne nysha jee
ghajab ke khayaal bayaan kiya hai.
Applause Applause
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