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Dosto kitni baar eise pal aate he or hame kabhi poori tarah to kabhi bahut hadd tak tod kar chale jate hain..yah sochta hun ki dekha jaye to har pal me kuchh achha hai...bas isi achhai ko talasha aaj maine...
aap bhi aaiye sath ..
suraj kaha tak chhup kar rahega mujse
raat ye kali kabhi to khatm hogi
uthi he ek andhi joron se to sahi
thamegi or tham kar narm bhi hogi
nahi dikhta aaj roshni ka anchal kya hua
savere ki khushamad aaj nahi to kal hogi
bikhar kar tootne mat dena "Abhi" chhoti us ummeed ko
masoom hai khilkar kabhi to haqeeqat hogi
chhod de agar sath parchhai bhi gam na karna
he to apni hi, apno ki zarurat kabhi to hogi
darwaze sab band sahi vishwas bas banaye rakhna
bhale thodi der sahi manzil se mulaqaat to hogi
barsaat aaj amad he tujhe bhigone ki khatir
bheeg le jee bhar ke fir bahar ki rounak bhi hogi
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2010, 12:18:48 PM » |
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bht hi inspiring poem hai ye aapki abhi ji......naumeedee k daur me ye poem jarur ek chhoti ummeedd jagati hai.....
har rk baat apni jagah khas hai
chhod de agar sath parchhai bhi gam na karna
he to apni hi, apno ki zarurat kabhi to hogi
ye line sabse achchi lagi....
mastam poem ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 01:02:49 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 02:10:22 PM » |
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behad khoobsurat khayaal zahir kiya hai abhi ji. wah.
firaq gorakhpuri ka ek sher yaad aataa hai jo mushkil haalaat mein mein jeene ki aas ke baare mein hai ...
kucchh kafas ki teeliyon se chhan raha hai noor sa
kuchh faza kuchh hasrat e parwaaz ki baatein karo
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2010, 05:08:27 PM » |
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ek khubsurat ummeed Abhi ji... bahut achha likha hai !
jo toote hain khwaab ABHI to kya gham hai,
sazaao naye khwaab, ke raat to har shaam ke baad hogi... !
Intezar !
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«Reply #7 on: November 24, 2010, 06:22:25 AM » |
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bht hi inspiring poem hai ye aapki abhi ji......naumeedee k daur me ye poem jarur ek chhoti ummeedd jagati hai.....
har rk baat apni jagah khas hai
chhod de agar sath parchhai bhi gam na karna
he to apni hi, apno ki zarurat kabhi to hogi
ye line sabse achchi lagi....
mastam poem ji.....
hmm shukriya ji~ |
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«Reply #8 on: November 24, 2010, 06:27:31 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: November 24, 2010, 06:29:09 AM » |
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shukriya dost... ye to anu ji ki ek poem ko padhkar or inspiration lekar likha hai... sath rahiye yunhi.. |
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«Reply #10 on: November 24, 2010, 06:30:34 AM » |
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behad khoobsurat khayaal zahir kiya hai abhi ji. wah.
firaq gorakhpuri ka ek sher yaad aataa hai jo mushkil haalaat mein mein jeene ki aas ke baare mein hai ...
kucchh kafas ki teeliyon se chhan raha hai noor sa
kuchh faza kuchh hasrat e parwaaz ki baatein karo
wah ji bahut khoob...kya bat share ki hai... shukriya hosla badhane ke liye.... yunhi sath rahiye... |
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«Reply #11 on: November 24, 2010, 11:47:39 AM » |
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buhat aacha likha hai abhi ji.buhat din baad yoindia par aane ka waqt mila.par padhkar aacha lga.ye aap sab sachhe shayaro kahi kamaal hai ki isse judte hi sab uljhane kafoor ho jati hai.god bless you.
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2010, 05:54:27 AM » |
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Poonam ji likhne wale likh to de par use achha kehkqr safal banane wale to aap sab hi hote he..
tareef ke liye shukriya ...YO par sach bahut achhe shayar hain jinse gaahe bagaahe mujhe bhi bahut kuchh seekhne ko mil raha hai..
yunhi sath rahiye...
likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #13 on: November 25, 2010, 06:14:07 AM » |
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very inspiring poem abhi ji....
daad dher saari......
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2010, 07:08:42 AM » |
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shukriya manZil jiiii...
yunhi sath rahiye ..
likhte rahiye
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