KAHANI KARVA CHAUTH KE RAAT KI MERI AUR UNKI........

by Ishq007 on October 23, 2013, 01:36:28 AM
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Ye kavita maine kai saal pahle aaj ke hi din likhi thi... ye yaaden mere liye bahut khaash hai aur sayad hi mai kabhi inko bhool paun.. sayad ye kavita logo ko joke jaisi lage.. pr ye lines mere dil ke bahut aziz hai... mai jab bhi inko padhta hun ek alag hi ahsaas hota hai, mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise fir se wahi sab mere samne ho raha hai aur mai chup-chaap baitha sab dekh raha hun.... aur haan... mai mafi chahta hun qki isme last ki 6 lines maine 'shayri mobi' site ke ek shayar 'Aaksh chauhan' ki daal hai, usni ek kavita ki kuch lines mujhe bahut acchi lagi thi to maine iume ki kuch lines isme add ki hai... mafi chahta hun......


"Mohabbat bhi ajab shay hai ke jab baazi pe ati hai,
To sab kuch jeet leti hai, ya sab kuch haar deti hai..!!"


Kahani btata hun mai tum ko ek baar ki....
jyada purani nahi kal karvachauth ki raat, din shukrvaar ki....

kal meri jaan ne meri lambi umar ke liye karvachauth ka kathin vrat uthaya tha....
ye baat sun ke mera dil khusi se bhar aaya tha....

aaj maine usse kaha - "meri lambi umar teri sehat se jyada jaruri nahi hai....
to usne kaha - "jyada bakvaas mat kr, kal ka pura din bhukhe - pyase badi muskil se bitaya tha....

kal raat ko usne mujhse kaha - "jaanu vrat kholne ka koi tarika to bata de....
maine kaha mai kya karun jaan tu rahti itni door hai, mai kaise aaun tu hi samjha de....

usne mujhse se kaha - jaanu mai bagair tumhe dekhe apna vrat khol nahi sakti....
ye rivaaj hai is vrat ka, tum samjho meri majburi ko mai is paak rivaaj ko thod nahi sakti....

maine kaha khana ka le meri jaan mera bhi bhookh se bhura haal hai....
mai bhi tere liye pure din se bhukha - pyasa hun, ab to lagta hai ye meri jindgi ka akhiri saal hai....

aaj khelne gaya tha coching ke baad volleyball ka match, bhukh ke mare mere hanth bhi na uth rahe the....
bas kuch hi service mari thi, saale sab ke sab net me fas rahe the....

kisi tarah doston ko bahut tej sar dard hone ka bahana banaya tha....
maine tere liye vrat rakha hai, sharm ke maare ye unko ye bata bhi na paya tha....

maine kaha tu chinta na kar meri jaan, mai abhi ek latest photo Facebook pe upload karta hun....
khol le use dekh ke apna vrat, mai tahe dil se tujhse yahi fariyaad karta hun....

usne kaha theek hai, jaldi kar mai photo upload hone ka intzzar karti hun...
tab tak sun lo mere jaanu, mai tujhse apni jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hun....

maine photo upload kardi usne photo dekh kr apna vrat khol liya....
vrat kholne ki khabar pakar maine bhi ek glas dudh freez se nikal kar apne bhukhe pet me ghol liya....

usne mujhse kaha nikal liye janaab koi gift to diya hi nahi hai....
maine kaha darling ek fool hi de sakta hun is samay mere paas paiso ki bahut kami hai....

maine kaha tumhari jindgi me andhera hi andhera likha hai mere sang....
Jab ki tumhare paas pahle se hi roshni hai....

usne mujhse kaha - jaanu ye fool nahi tumhari mahobbat ka chiraag hoga....
uski roshni itni jyada hogi Jaise chamkta koi mehtaab hoga....

aur raha savaal daulat ka tera saath hi mere liye kafi hai....
ab aur jyada kuch mat kahna, bas mere ansuvon ka chalk jana baki hai....

maine kaha kasam apni mahobbat ki aaj mai khata hun....
tere kabil khud ko banaunga, is baat ko apni nas nas me basata hun.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2013, 01:40:22 AM »
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Nice Sharing!!!!!!!!!!!1
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2013, 01:52:17 AM »
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Sharing! nhi hai ye , jo jo real me huwa hai wahi likha hai aur khud se..........

"aur raha savaal daulat ka tera saath hi mere liye kafi hai....
ab aur jyada kuch mat kahna, bas mere ansuvon ka chalk jana baki hai....

maine kaha kasam apni mahobbat ki aaj mai khata hun....
tere kabil khud ko banaunga, is baat ko apni nas nas me basata hun........"

yahi lines dimaag me thi to khud se nhi likha aur wahi daal di..
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2013, 08:18:07 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2013, 09:34:23 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2013, 10:24:28 AM »
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bahut sundar rachna, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Ishq ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2013, 11:19:57 AM »
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bahut khoob ishq ji,
right thoughts at right time
shubh kaamnayen
ghanshamdas ahuja
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2013, 04:00:57 PM »
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wowwwww............. lovely and adorable.... really from the heart.... very nice

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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2013, 08:20:32 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwww bahut khooooob......bahut  hi achcha likhe ho....dheron daaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2013, 08:55:07 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2013, 06:41:54 PM »
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OMG... Veryy Beautifull Creation.. Touched My Heart..
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