Kahi thi ek choti si baat

by Pooja on February 28, 2008, 11:19:22 PM
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Kahne ko kuch nahi, phir bhi dil udaas hai
Kahi thi ek choti si baat, kaya yah bhi koi baat hai

Zid hi kaya wo jise koi maan na de saka
Bin baat dil toot gaya, kaya yah raz ki baat hai

Kyun karte hai intzaar, jab na koi baat hai
Chalo acha hua jo hua, shayad yahi takdeer ki baat hai

Kahin yah  dil bhi janata hai ki ruth na payege
Magar kahin ander jo toot gaya, usse zord bhi na payege

Kahne ko kuch nahi, phir bhi dil udaas hai
Kahi thi ek choti si baat, kaya yah bhi koi baat hai!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2008, 11:27:26 PM »
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Marvellous Pooja...very very touching.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 29, 2008, 02:51:25 AM »
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Lovely...

Kehne ko kuch nahi, magar her taraf bikare hai yaad ke Nishaniyan
Her ek cheez main bhasi hai tere hi perchayiyan

Aapse hame hai pyar, hey sanam, bata kaise yakeen dilaye?
Kaise teri pyar bari baathein dilse juda karde?

 
Yaad bankar ek hansi hothoin pe aayi,
Par teri us muskaan ko yaad karke yeh aankhein bhi nam hogayi

Magar ek aap hai, phir se laut kar na aaye
Na manane ki koshish ki ..!!

Kehne ko to kuch b nahi, bas sirf ek choti si baat thi...
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«Reply #3 on: February 29, 2008, 03:20:16 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Talat!! bahoot dil se likhi tha kal yah Usual Smile

wah kaya baat hai Roja.. bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 29, 2008, 03:35:14 PM »
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KEHNE KO KUCH BHI NAHI PAR
DIL APNA BHI AAJ UDAAS HAI...

JO BAAT SIRF EK DIL SE DUSRE DIL TAK PAHUNCHNE KI THI
AGAR WAHI BAAT KAHIN AUR BHI HO,
TO PHIR KYA WOH KOI CHIPA HUA RAAZ HAI....

UNKI HAR EK HASRAT POORI KAR LETA "KHWAISH"
PAR MERE DIL SE BHI KOI KUCH PUCHE
MAIN BHI INSAAN HOON,MERE DIL MEIN BHI KUCH EHSAAS HAI...

DIL TOOTA BHI HAI TO JUD JAAYEGA
MUJHE AB UNKE WOH DIL KE TOOTE HUE,
TUKDO KI HI TALAASH HAI...


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«Reply #5 on: February 29, 2008, 03:39:48 PM »
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wowow too good Khwaish ji!! bahoot hi payara jawab likha hai apne!!

Dil ke katre shabdo main beh jaate hai
Aor nahi kuch pass mere, bas yahi shabd rah jaate hai

Milte hai insaan dost ke roop main
Dil-o-deemag per cha jaate hai

Waqat ke sath chal dete hai apni apni zindagi main
Hum phir wahin tanha rah jaate hai

Dil ke katre shabdon mai beh jaate hai
Aor nahi kuch pass mere, bas yahi shabd rah jaate hai
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2008, 07:41:42 PM »
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beete hue gile shikawe yaad ayye
ek baat per na jaane kitne khayal chale ayye
choto choti baatein na jaane kab bana gai yaadein
ajj baithe jab akele, na jaane kaya kaya afsaane yaad ayye
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«Reply #7 on: May 30, 2008, 09:17:14 AM »
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Kahne ko kuch nahi, phir bhi dil udaas hai
Kahi thi ek choti si baat, kaya yah bhi koi baat hai

Zid hi kaya wo jise koi maan na de saka
Bin baat dil toot gaya, kaya yah raz ki baat hai

Kyun karte hai intzaar, jab na koi baat hai
Chalo acha hua jo hua, shayad yahi takdeer ki baat hai

Kahin yah  dil bhi janata hai ki ruth na payege
Magar kahin ander jo toot gaya, usse zord bhi na payege

Kahne ko kuch nahi, phir bhi dil udaas hai
Kahi thi ek choti si baat, kaya yah bhi koi baat hai!!


mujhe lagta hai kisi ne aapse koi baat chipaai hai aur is KAVITA ka janm hua?
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«Reply #8 on: May 30, 2008, 02:50:50 PM »
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sahi kaha bekarar ji apne!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2008, 05:19:34 PM »
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superbbb Pooja sis..ek se badh kar ek likha hi aapne
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2008, 06:43:16 PM »
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Thanks nikki....
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2008, 06:45:38 PM »
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Roja, Khwaish, Pooja ..bohot khoob Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2008, 06:53:49 PM »
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pooja ji,khwaish ji-bahut accha likha he aapne.aap sub ko pudh kar mujhe garv mehssoos hota he ki mere kadam sahi disha mein agrsar he.
roja ji-acchi kaushish aapki taraf se bhee.

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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2008, 01:58:01 PM »
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shukaria prateek ji, apko yah kavita pasand aai!!
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«Reply #14 on: June 04, 2008, 12:39:33 PM »
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 bas ek hee jawaab

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

netra......
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