KAIFIYAT ---------A.B

by adil bechain on April 07, 2009, 05:01:43 AM
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           TERI 'SOORAT' BASI HAI AANKHON MAIN ISS QADAR..,

           'AAINEY'  MAIN  BHI  TERI TASWEER AATI HAI NAZAR..!!


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            TAUBAA , JO KAR RAKHAA HAI 'JAAM' SEY..!

            BUS 'PYAALA' CHOOM KAR NIKAL AATAA HOON MAIYKHANEY SEY..!!


                $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$


            DARWAAZA NAHIN TOOTEY GAA -EK DASTAKH SEY..,

            MERAA  HAAL BHI POOCH LO, JAB BHI GUZRO IDHAR SEY..!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 07:15:35 AM »
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Bohat khoob adil......bas ek shikayat hain tumhare sher bohat khoobsurat hote hain, par jab tak tum inhe ek mukammal kalam me nahi shamil karoge yeh zaya hote rahege.

Tumhare sher motiyo ki tarah hain inki mala banaya karo phir dekho inki khoobsurti me kaisa nikhaar aata hain.
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2009, 11:23:26 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on April 07, 2009, 05:01:43 AM



           TERI 'SOORAT' BASI HAI AANKHON MAIN ISS QADAR..,

           'AAINEY'  MAIN  BHI  TERI TASWEER AATI HAI NAZAR..!!


                #####################################


            TAUBAA , JO KAR RAKHAA HAI 'JAAM' SEY..!

            BUS 'PYAALA' CHOOM KAR NIKAL AATAA HOON MAIYKHANEY SEY..!!


                $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$


            DARWAAZA NAHIN TOOTEY GAA -EK DASTAKH SEY..,

            MERAA  HAAL BHI POOCH LO, JAB BHI GUZRO IDHAR SEY..!!

Very Nice shers Adil Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2009, 06:45:49 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 07, 2009, 07:15:35 AM
Bohat khoob adil......bas ek shikayat hain tumhare sher bohat khoobsurat hote hain, par jab tak tum inhe ek mukammal kalam me nahi shamil karoge yeh zaya hote rahege.

Tumhare sher motiyo ki tarah hain inki mala banaya karo phir dekho inki khoobsurti me kaisa nikhaar aata hain.

Aap ki nasihat per koshi karoon gaa...Shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2009, 06:46:26 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 07, 2009, 11:23:26 AM
Very Nice shers Adil Ji

Thank u Celmira ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2009, 06:49:26 AM »
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Wah wah Adil ji kitna acha likhte ho aap,excellent,bahut khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Wah wah Adil ji kitna acha likhte ho aap,excellent,bahut khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

THANK U MADHUWESH JI
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2009, 12:28:52 PM »
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GOOD WORK  Applause
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GOOD WORK  Applause

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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2010, 10:11:18 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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